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The title of this book is really malicious and attractive. I was attracted by the title of the book. It turned out that the introduction said that it was before the plot started. At first, I thought it was Goldfinger at the beginning, but I was disappointed. What was the result? It turns out that Jin Qun named himself Niutou Xubai. He is really trying to sell his flesh on a sheep's head. When reading a novel these days, you have to be wary of headline-grabbers.

If you are an old author who has changed your vest, then your previous books must have done poorly. There are a lot of things new writers have wrong with them. If you fail to grasp the key points, write live broadcasts, write main plots, battles, and chat, how many chapters have you lost after cutting a virtual one? I want to write about everything and expand on everything, a typical novice problem. Cutting off a virtual character in a few strokes, a few large dialogues to complete the plot, and focusing on the chatting experience will be much better than writing this way, or the other way around. Don't hammer here and there, it will look terrible. I can't hold on to the shelf part anymore.

Haruhime is still a virgin. When she served those men before, they fainted when they saw her. Later, they also said that she was pure. The author wrote randomly.

I was attracted by the title, but ended up being deceived. There is not so much accountability for choosing a conventional name. What bad luck

If you want to write that the main character is a fictitious person, rather than the name of the chat ****, I will definitely be happy to read it, but is it fun for you to deceive people?

Very watery. . Ten thousand words can do something. This author can write at least 50,000 words, so that the supporting roles are all silly, and the protagonist is even more silly.

You don't need to think about it if you're passing by. I only know the number of words about water. It's damning that the protagonist only knows about water every day. I think Aizen is Naraku.

I was deceived by the title of the book, and I thought it was written with Xu Bai as the protagonist.

I guess the author, Death, has never read it. The clouds are all in a mess.

Chapter 45: What the hell is the first Kenpachi Zaraki? Shouldn't it be the first Kenpachi?