A Muggle Magician's Guide to Surviving Hogwarts

How should I put it? Lockhart is indeed an abstract person. You can call him a genius. He is very good at forgetting spells and has tricked a bunch of powerful wizards. He has prospered and his political status is not bad. But you can say he is strong. He only has the Forgetting Curse. He cannot say that he doesn't know everything about other magical things. He can only say that he has a half-knowledge. The existence of this person makes me extremely uncertain about the intelligence of the entire magical community.

The protagonist doesn't practice the exercises himself even though he is drawn to practice them. Do you think he is strong enough? This really means that the system is nothing.

Ordinary seawater has no effect on Devil Fruits. One Piece's seawater will cause weakness because it contains the seastone substance.

I feel like the title and the beginning of the book are all attractive, but after the fancy lottery, the book becomes boring. It would be better to directly draw the source of magic and express the magic in the form of magic.

I think you, the author, don't understand the settings of many abilities at all. There are many mistakes and omissions in the settings, which makes me feel a little uncomfortable.

While walking, flowers bloomed and petals floated everywhere. I didn't care about the power, all I wanted was to pull the wind~

Let's first say that it's okay for Harry to become Harley, but I hope everyone will exercise restraint and restrain themselves. Don't talk to me about accepting Harley. The author is still young and can't stand this kind of contamination.

You have a space ring, so you can do some so-called magic. This is actually the function of magic props. You tell others it is magic. Is this considered fraud? Also, how many people can you deceive when you go to school? You are famous in the Muggle community. Thousands of people watch your performance at a time. If there is a TV station to broadcast it, then millions or tens of millions of people may watch your live broadcast. Wouldn't you make more money by cheating???

It looks very funny, even if it's an original character you wrote

After the God of Death came out, he started to go off topic a lot. Magic has not changed, and people no longer cheat. Now, the God of Death is cheating again. If you want to write like this, I hope you can keep a few more readers.