In the Hot-Blooded World, Everything in My Sight Is Mine to Rule

After all, both of them are protagonists, so it's hard to write about them. If you're not careful, you'll end up writing something wrong.

To be honest, author, who would read what you write like this? Hot-blooded fans watch fighting and fun, not daily life.

Why can't you just stand on the ceiling of force at the beginning, start with a ghost-back control type, one punch and you will be invincible immediately, and then recruit the younger brother to conquer the world? I suggest you re-open the book. The world level can be from the beginning of I am a big brother to Regao, Rejie and so on.

Why can't I find many updated books on Hot Blood now? I can't find this one either. I only found it from the author's homepage.

The name Takumi... Does the protagonist have a first love who goes to live in the countryside for a few days from time to time?

Why is this plot development so similar to the movie High School? Isn't this the journey from Genji to Suzuran! Even the name is similar, GUPVSGPS

No, no, no!!! The fight scenes still don't work!! Author, you have written so much, how come you still can't write fighting scenes?

Come on, write sword Naomi

No one in Fengxian is good at this book

The protagonist is not a boxer, so why don't you see him using his legs very often? The properties panel only writes about hands and not legs?