Playing with Magic in Genshin Impact

The author should be a newcomer, and his writing style is a little weak, but he writes in a hurry, giving people the feeling of a running account. He can write a little slower, and write more about the interaction between the characters and the emotions. Make the characters fuller and write the adventure process in more detail to enhance the reader's sense of involvement. The last thing is the system problem. Don't make it too strong all at once, otherwise the combat power will easily collapse. Newbies don't want to have too many systems because it's difficult to write. Since you have chosen a magic system, let's refer to some online information. When you write about magic, you insist on adding an immortal golden body, which makes people feel that it is too dramatic.

I feel like I've seen it but not completely. .

It feels a bit like a running account, not very attractive.

How can I put it? It's pretty good.

Tianli is a conscious but incorporeal existence. Did the author confuse Tianli and the maintainer of Tianli?

I'm waiting for the day when you really write a good book

Commentary on Chapter 9 Yingmei's Gift from "I Play Magic in Genshin Impact" written by Go Yue Yue Lanmao.

Chapter 19: "I Play Magic in Genshin Impact" written by Go Yue Yue Lan Mao. Wouldn't you dream of meeting a girl with a cat head? Chapter review.

No matter how you think about it, it's easy to think of Bone King. After all, super magic started, and then there were world-class props.

Commentary on Chapter 12 Going to Liyue in "I Play Magic in Genshin Impact" written by Go Yue Yue Lanmao.