In Iwagakure, with a Groudon Inside Me!
人在岩隐，体内一个固拉多！
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 908k Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
335Chapters
3.2MReads
40.3kFlowers
10.0Score
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Are you, Groudon, of pure blood? If you learn Light and Heavy Rock and then make Groudon that can fly, then it is not Groudon. Groudon that cannot fly is a good Groudon.
Why can't the protagonist have film-level strength, so that the protagonist has the ability to intervene and not be passive, and can also make plans? You obviously don't want to make the protagonist's problems too high, which will cause the previous writing to be very slow. It feels like a person can jump on the protagonist's head, which feels very frustrating. The protagonist never takes the initiative to attack, and is always in a passive state of retaliation. I read another novel of yours, and it felt similar to this one. In the early stage, you tried hard to cause trouble for the protagonist, just to prevent him from growing up. Then, in the later stage, the protagonist became invincible and had nothing to write about, so it ended suddenly and was unfinished. There aren't enough people in Tsuchikage Village. Don't you know how to be original? This is fan fiction, not the original work, so why can't I add my own characters? Are you afraid that you will have nothing to write later? There is no big hole in the Otsutsuki clan. You can pull it up!
I always feel that Ōnoki here is very weak. In the original novel, Ōnoki is definitely not someone like Orochimaru Danzo who can match him. All the snakes should have died immediately after eating Ōnoki. However, here he is still alive. This is outrageous.
I don't like it, it's just that Pokémon Fuki doesn't understand Naruto's strength at all and thinks Groudon can compete with Otsutsuki Zento.
Has Groudon learned how to light and heavy rocks?
There aren't any mythical beasts that can't fly, right? @Groudon
The protagonist must learn to fly
Personally, I like the Third Tsuchikage, the guardian of the calf. There is basically no darkness in the village. As long as you have the ability, you can be the shadow.
What does Musashi have to do with Gauss, right? Just like Shiraishi can fly, it has nothing to do with my cliff-sword, Sword God Groudon.
Does anyone know which country's mythology Indra and Asura are from?