The Weirdness Returns: I Have a Monster Simulator
诡异复苏 我有个怪物模拟器
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 262k Words
- Subgenre
- Supernatural
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
143Chapters
2.4MReads
23.3kFlowers
10.0Score
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Reader comments 50
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For this kind of behind-the-scenes writing, novice writers should just give the protagonist a passive invincibility. The monsters under his control are the main attraction. What everyone wants to see is the plot of the monster, not the plot of the protagonist being chased by others. In fact, the protagonist does not need to show up. The protagonist can still live his daily life. The monster and the protagonist do not need to meet. The two are parallel lines. Just focus on the power and weirdness of the monster.
Just kill him and that's it. He can't find the protagonist yet, so he levels up like crazy.
I have written twenty chapters about a family quarrel. Are you an orphan?
What we readers want to see is the plot of the monster simulator, not the daily urban plot of the protagonist. Don't try to deceive the readers by trying to sell the meat on someone else's head.
It's a grind to kill people. You can't kill someone at level 4 or level 3. A person who has just awakened his ability can hold back the protagonist's level 4. Is this such a waste? The black version is said to be three times stronger. He's so stupid. He acts very childishly and only plays with his mobile phone like a psycho.
I want to see rivers of blood, and I want to see the protagonist commanding monsters to kill in front of everyone, while others are helpless and can only be helpless and furious. Is there anything similar?
Living well As for writing, newcomers don't require so much. I suggest you adjust the pronouns. It's too confusing. I suggest you unify the pronouns so that which person is which. It's a bit confusing to distinguish between people. The protagonist's character needs to be adjusted according to the plot, otherwise the protagonist will still be a comedian despite being a life-and-death person. Not available for now
It's rare to see someone writing dark stuff on this website, I hope it won't be hacked
When will the author prepare a case?
It is recommended that there be less inner activity, it is too watery. It is recommended that the dying person does not need to be played, and can be killed directly. It is recommended that the protagonist simply be decisive. Go dark