Hogwarts: From Obscurial to Dark Lord

A self-aware clone, or a clone of good and evil—you really dare to write that.

Authentic Chinese restaurants can't even survive overseas, so be realistic when you're praising them.

There are actually people writing about the Poisonous Clone Technique.

Hermione probably fell for the main character; she could be kind to Hermione and mean to Luna.

Toby, you're amazing! The immersion is instant! I've always wanted a book with house-elves as the main characters, and I've finally found you!

Is this really not an ordinary protagonist? The writing makes me feel like the author is incredibly stupid. No developing power? I suggest changing it to "My Dark Lord Career at Hogwarts".

I'm doing this to myself... Author, what mental state were you in when you wrote this?

Why split into two?! It's confusing!

The moment they start showing the clones, it's a disaster. There's absolutely no sense of immersion. Two main characters? They're just plain stupid.

They actually separated the good and evil of the soul into clones, and these clones even had their own consciousness. Let's see how the author handles it.