Fantasy: I Want to Become an Immortal

Please read the new book and give your suggestions. I think I can continue writing it, or there is some need to continue writing it. Please give me some suggestions or flowers or something. Even if I try to sell the pot, I will persevere. If the writing is genuine, just pretend I didn't say it! You can just row away. Thank you, your precious suggestions can give me unlimited motivation! Bow and thank you This novel and its characters are purely fictitious. Any similarity is purely coincidental and should not be imitated.