Pokemon: From Charmander to WarGreymon

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How do you continue to read a book with contradictory settings? I suspect that the monthly tickets are paid. This book is far worse than the other one on the list.

Not to mention that Chi Ye's Charizard can defeat the level 1 god Mewtwo, even Xiaozhi's Charizard can defeat the level 3 god Frozen Bird.

This is not to say that cool writing is not good, the main thing is not to be too intellectual. To take the most obvious example, when fighting Mew, you knew to kill the trainer first. As a result, the protagonist came, Mew was suppressed and beaten, and the remaining people just stood around stupidly. Even if you tried to attack the trainer on the opposite side, in order to let The protagonist can pretend to be cool, just say that Mew's shield is still there. When he finally used the power of Gaia, he knew that he was locked, so he ran to the opposite side. There was no one on the other side that could defeat Mew. Once he was locked, he was locked. The worst is to change his character. A good cool novel can be illogical, but don't be too smart. What's even more awkward is that I watched it because of the protagonist's new evolutionary route, and the collision between Pokémon and Digimon is also very novel. The result is quite good. I told the trainer my name and asked the trainer to call me Lin Xuan. I really don't understand. In the Pokémon world, even if there are individual trainers who give Pokémon names, it's still a nickname. You can add your first name and surname. In the Pokémon literature, it's outrageous to see trainers call their Pokémon Lin Xuan.

Let me remind you that the author is a wise man. She does not distinguish between men and women, and she uses men. And she has never changed it.

For example, in the latest chapter, it is obvious that only the protagonist can deal with the king-level elves, but the heroine just watches these cannon fodder of the city defense army rush forward? Then when someone tried to use the human wave tactic, there was no action/reaction at all? Does she have to wait until everyone is lying down before she comes out again and pretends to be a pig? What is the reason and purpose of writing this way?

It's too low. I can only compete with skills, but there is no change in the use of skills.

It seems really uncomfortable to write the heroine as him. What kind of writing is this? It's really messed up. Go back and revise it. I saw this in the first few chapters.