Hogwarts: Shooting Dumbledore from the Start

The depiction of the heroine is very disappointing and off-putting. You said it yourself that the protagonist is a thirty-year-old virgin who likes an eleven-year-old brat and treats him like a pet, which is very unpleasant.

Can anyone really stand watching this arrogant girl calling the protagonist a pet and mocking the protagonist in all kinds of ways? Or maybe the protagonist has forgotten the concept that China has cultivated since childhood, that everyone is equal, which made me feel inexplicably aggrieved.

Lick* Author, you can't make any money anyway, you really deserve it, throw yourself into the street

Author, if you don't know how to write a heroine, why don't you? I'm not in the mood to read anymore.

One hundred and thirty-eight errors, Voldemort's Horcrux and notebook are in the Malfoy family, the Ravenclaw diadem in Hogwarts is in the Black family, the Hufflepuff gold cup is in the Gringotts gold of Voldemort's subordinate. Library, Nagi* was made by killing a Muggle after he returned. That is to say, before the five Horcruxes, there was no Nagi*. They were five things plus one Harry. But Voldemort didn't know, so he made what he thought was the sixth, but actually the seventh Nagi*.

I finally decided to continue writing this book and update it soon!

The author can create something of his own that is not found in the original work. The world of Harry Potter is not high in magic, but the magic is more focused on the heart.

Can you please stop being too ****? Has the protagonist never seen a woman before? Licking anyone you meet

I don't even know what to say, it just feels so retarded to me. Just writing those few dialogues was **. Once I wrote it to Dumbledore, it made me feel **. You are not from the wizarding world, why are you afraid of him?

Just treat it as a disgusting person?