Horror Simulator: A Red-Clad Vengeful Ghost Comes Knocking from the Start

What's going on? Do you like reading torture articles so much? Do you like watching the protagonist struggle between life and death so much? If you like watching it so much, you can go to Maomao! What are you trying to do here?

First of all, the writing style is okay, but the writing is not exciting enough, especially in the latest chapters, you are already on the 4th level of ghosts. I went to the winery to rescue someone who wrote Momojiji. The most important thing is that it is too watery and too Moji. When entering the winery, instead of directly unfolding the four levels of ghosts, you open the first level. , And then open the second floor, one after another, which makes people feel very frustrated and unhappy. Also, when you went to deal with the red-headed witch in your house who controlled people with wires, you absorbed the sly. How could she still use the power of the sly to forcibly cheat? If you are a woman, then cheat. If everyone wants you to be like this, control the magic and let you absorb it, and you can use the power of the magic to be invincible. Just like a person can run without returning. When he has legs, he will not run fast and will still get tired. If you eat his legs, he will not get tired if he runs faster. That woman didn't write much, and it can be changed.

The writing is also good, and it is recommended that you have a good relationship with the supernatural bureau and the popular books! If the writing is close, just write about the Lone Ranger, but don't write about any drama about turning against the country. Those who kill the world can't give you data.

I hope that the attitude towards Lin Yixue will not be as protective as in the foreseen future. If it were a different world, that inexplicable intimacy would be nothing, but this is a terrifying resurgence, a "cute little girl" who can inexplicably affect your mind and threaten you. "Children", shouldn't we be more vigilant? Their attitude seems to be the protagonist. It is obvious that their lives are threatened, they are testing and threatening, don't give them a good look, even if the other party may give you some incredible treasure later, at least don't lick them

Indeed, the plot of the supernatural incident in the club is not handled very well, and it always feels a bit too cruel. Usually it is the male villain, and the female villain who is not young and beautiful is killed by the protagonist's plot. But I think the female character this time seems okay at first sight, but suddenly the character is reversed and she turns out to be a vicious female character, which is a bit hard to accept. Maybe some people think that it is very realistic and should be so intriguing, but I think it is good to beautify it a little, at least it will be more comfortable to read. In fact, I think the setting of this book is quite good, and I hope the author will continue his work and be less poisonous.

This update is probably a beautiful thing, isn't it, pretty boy?

Which women can't be killed?

I feel pretty good after reading it, but is the protagonist's strength improving a little too fast? With only a few hundred thousand words, the protagonist is already basically invincible, and it doesn't take much effort to solve the S-class ghost incident... It always feels like there is no sense of thriller and horror...

The transformation of the club was too blunt. At first glance, you can tell that the original character was intended to be a decent character, but it was not written well. It made people feel ****. After being raised with opinions, he was abruptly changed into a villain. The result was three completely different characters, especially Lin Yuna.

I'm speechless, another book that starts to cut the main character right after opening it.