Commercial Renovation Livestream: I Scared the Show's Crew from the Start
商业改造直播：开局吓哭节目组
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 159k Words
- Genre
- Urban Romance
- Subgenre
- Urban Superpowers
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
79Chapters
1.5MReads
11.8kFlowers
10.0Score
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33 And 34 are the same
To be honest, the writing is quite nice, but I may be a bit unlucky, and your updates are too slow and your exposure rate is too low.
You're so ecstatic with this chapter.
33 And 34 are repeated
It feels to me that the protagonist is too weak, and there is no description at all. It is usually based on the perspective of the protagonist. It is not fun if you write it this way. Without detailed description, you just follow one copy scene after another. It is systematic but has no drama. It does not feel like cheating. It is biased towards the genre. It feels like reading a story collection and rushing to the horror house and haunted house. As a result, it does not develop horror houses and horror culture. It does not make horror movies, does not produce horror games, software peripherals, and does not even have a world view.
There are also many shortcomings, but you can take a look at this. This probably means the type.
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