The Shadow Mage at Hogwarts

It's over, I'm not interested in reading it, because I lose the sense of immersion in reading it this way. After all, we readers know the plot. Anyway, that's how I feel.

You're overdoing it at the beginning, haven't you even learned how Malfoy can do so many spells?

The reason why Harry wanted to live in the Dursleys' house was because he needed Aunt Harry's bloodline to support the bloodline magic cast by Harry's mother, but as twins they should be able to provide each other with bloodline support. Why are you still living at the Dursleys?

If you don't know anything about it, don't write about time travel. Write about local creations, otherwise it will look awkward.

It's Harry Potter Famine!?

Are you bothered by the processing fee? Instruct slaves to use some of your functions. Girl, please send it out and imitate it. Can you be a man or a woman? Otherwise, how can people just be in full bloom?

Keep writing, Harry Potter fandom has been gaining momentum recently

Good guy, we haven't even reached chapter 40 yet, and it's already 130,000 words long! It's not very common in Feilu.

Able to perform very well, ho ho ho ho ho ho ho ho ho ho post v Mud, can the Russian military not regulate those men and women who have been inside for nine years? You are awesome. Isn't that awesome? That gang treated your girl over there.

****, Go back and drink milk! Stop writing.