
Urban: After My Confession, My Notebook Mutated
都市:告白后,我的笔记本变异了
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 5 Words
- Genre
- Urban Romance
- Subgenre
- Romantic Fiction
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
1Chapters
749kReads
37.3kFlowers
10.0Score
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After my grandma's best friend got divorced, I confessed to her; after my brother's divorce, I confessed to my younger brother and sister-in-law. After my father got divorced, I confessed to my stepmother; after my siblings and best friends got divorced, I confessed to them After my aunt's best friend got divorced, I confessed to her; after my sister-in-law's best friend got divorced, I confessed to her After my uncle divorced, I confessed to my aunt; after my uncle divorced, I confessed to my aunt After my stepmother's best friend got divorced, I confessed to her; after my aunt's best friend got divorced, I confessed to her After my eldest brother got divorced, I confessed to my sister-in-law; after my stepmother got divorced, I confessed to my sister. After my sister-in-law's best friend got divorced, I confessed to her; after my ex-wife's best friend got divorced, I confessed to her After my ex-wife and sister got divorced, I confessed to me; after my stepfather got divorced, I confessed to my sister.
This author is really disrespecting his talent by not working as a screenwriter in Madou.
But there are no exceptions. After reading it, I feel that there are some problems with the setting. The setting of the female protagonist is okay, but there is a big problem with the male protagonist. The male protagonist is too immature and not good enough. If we follow this setting, there will definitely be abuse later on. Otherwise, would such a strong heroine be with someone who is more than ten years older than herself? Besides, the male protagonist was raised by her. Let's add some settings to the male protagonist. It depends on what you write later.
Just based on your book title, I read it
I can't bear to put it on a pedestal because there is real emotion in it. There are no colorful words, but it emits simple and desirable love.
If you have any questions or suggestions about the direction of the plot, please reply here.
It feels like it ended a little too early, as if it was ended specifically for the sake of ending. It will feel better if I have a few more chapters to describe Aunt Ji and the protagonist's thoughts. Now it feels like the author is in a hurry and is in a hurry to finish it.
Why do I feel like licking the more I watch? The more I watch, the more uncomfortable I feel.
The protagonist is useless without a system, and his character and speech feel childish.
Ahhhh. . . Hurry up and let Aunt Ji know the truth.