Tomb Raiding: Old Wu Dog's Notes, and a Monster in the Nine Gates

Even though you're a time traveler, you're practically invincible now, so why not take the opportunity to collect your second brother's remains? After all, the diary clearly states that your second brother tried to save you but failed and perished in the Blood Corpse Tomb.

Ah Ning should just give up on Tianzhen. It's not suitable for you. You're already of grandfatherly age; it's not appropriate for you to steal Tianzhen's heart.

The author is still a complete newbie. The protagonist is already so awesome, why bother following the plot? What's the point of writing this novel then? I might as well just watch the TV series, damn it.

Just change it to "Nine Gates, There's a Show-off," it's simple and easy to understand.

Flying on a sword? This is hilarious! Author, are you a primary school student? This is already weird enough, and now you're adding this cultivation stuff?

You're turning a tomb raiding novel into a cultivation novel? And even making it about flying on a sword?

Wu Xie's father should be the eldest, since he calls Er Bai and San Sheng "uncle".

Third Uncle and Chen Wenjin, Second Uncle and Qi Jin... The Grave Robbers' Chronicles don't include love.

The main character was right there, but he failed at the crucial moment. Following the original story would only provide short-term financial gain; nobody would read it later.

The protagonist is such a useless piece of trash! He's so amazing, yet he can never save anyone and he's so slow-witted. What good is he? He's practically the epitome of trash!