
Tianhe Street: Learning Tian Guishi's Swallow Returns to Its Nest from the Start
天和街:开局学会天贵史的燕回巢
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 73k Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Film & TV Fanfiction
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
38Chapters
1.3MReads
8kFlowers
10.0Score
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The data in this book is not good, so I have no hope! I may not update much, but I will try my best to keep updating. If you have any good suggestions or opinions, please comment and I will read them. Then I will make this book more enjoyable based on your suggestions. Thank you very much for your support!!!
Isn't Dojima a member of the Go Musou school?
I see that the author has written in many places about standing upright after touching the cards. For example, how can the card player stand upright after touching the cards? I hope the author will pay attention to this.
The descriptions of the card games are the same and too repetitive, and the plot is not a big problem, but when written, I feel that the writing style is not enough, and the ups and downs are very watery. You have to write the island country competition as if it were a fantasy novel. After all, it is a super power competition. You need to use a lot of mahjong-specific words, don't be too colloquial, learn to explain, otherwise the game will have no momentum at all and it will feel very flat.
About "Tianhe Street: The Swallow Returns to the Nest Who Learned the History of Tiangui at the Beginning" written by Joyoung Doujiu Machine Chapter 7: Turn off the lights and turn on the switch, repeat the old trick! (Ask for flowers) Chapter review.
1. In the first game where the protagonist and Tian fight against Ronghe, it should be straight, one-shot, and one-qi. Regardless of the fact that Xifeng is a field wind and a treasure card, it should be a slam. Hongzhong is useless as a sparrow. 2. The article about the second encounter states that the three colors of Dihu are in a straight line. However, the condition of Dihu is that the first round of the game is in the state of not calling the cards before calling Dihu. This is inconsistent with the order of Tiancuo described in the article. 3. This is also a three-color hand. The order of seats is Tianguishi → Zetian → Protagonist → Old Man. The old man is in the upper house of heaven and cannot get 90,000 wrong cards. These are several serious problems discovered so far. I hope the author can write more carefully.
The battle between the East and the West was two years after Tian and Akagi's fight. Let's watch TV while writing this. Maybe Ikawa could change his mind within a week???
About "Tianhe Street: The Swallow Returns to the Nest Who Learned the History of Tiangui at the Beginning" written by Joyoung Doujiu Machine Chapter 33: Rewards arrive! Shura card wave. (Please give me flowers and collect them!) Chapter review.
1. In the first game where the protagonist and Tian fight against Ronghe, it should be straight, one-shot, and one-qi. Regardless of the fact that Xifeng is a field wind and a treasure card, it should be a slam. Hongzhong is useless as a sparrow. 2. The article about the second encounter states that the three colors of Dihu are in a straight line. However, the condition of Dihu is that the first round of the game is in the state of not calling the cards before calling Dihu. This is inconsistent with the order of Tiancuo described in the article. 3. This is also a three-color hand. The order of seats is Tianguishi → Zetian → Protagonist → Old Man. The old man is in the upper house of heaven and cannot get 90,000 wrong cards. These are several serious problems discovered so far. I hope the author can write more carefully.
About "Tianhe Street: The Yan Hui Nest Who Learned the History of Tiangui at the Beginning" written by Joyoung Doujiu Machine Chapter 30: The Strongest Battle in Kanto! (Flowers please!) Chapter review.