Metropolis: I Reported Wechat Business at the Beginning and I Became the Top

The author of this book is a cloud food prisoner

The story is too cliche... There is no sense of surprise and the overall story is bland... The first aid is beautiful and poor. If you continue at work, your boss must be white, rich and beautiful... The noble person you help is also super rich... The first reward must be force and physical fitness... The cup-installation plot also relies on system tasks. Without tasks, you will basically just focus on not speaking out... That's not to say that these plots can't exist, but don't just do it like stacking buffs, let's do them all? I just feel lazy...

Hurry up and upgrade, no one will read the slow-burning articles.

Let the bad guys play with your mother? I am dating in a more serious system. I talk about the background and the girl more than the main text. I don't even know what to write. Do you have an outline? Why don't you change your name to me and take the system's reward Cao Fan?

Chapter 8: The Beginning of the Tang Dynasty's Imperial Edict: Destined to be blessed by heaven, the emperor's edict said? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? Llll Please make up the history

I don't know if the advertisement at the end costs money (;｀O?)O

The protagonist hasn't upgraded in a long time. If you want to suppress the protagonist, you won't do it and forget about the cheats like other authors.

Not only is it dull, but there are very few chapters, and there are repeated notes at the end of each chapter, which makes it difficult for people to continue reading. Especially for readers who like to listen to books, they have to listen to repeated notes at the end of each chapter. It is too easy to lose the good impression, and the interest originally attracted by the title is almost exhausted.

Can you not add so much introduction and lower the word count? We are here to read novels, not popular science.

When I was in college, four hundred to six hundred a month was enough. That's because I eat meat every meal, and my classmates who save a little are less than 300 a month. Rice is less than two yuan for three meals a day. A vegetarian dish is only one piece, how much can you eat for ten yuan a day?

Wherever the leaves are flying, the fire will continue to grow. Let the fire burn the leaves. Finally, the fire will die because there is no combustible material.

Is it okay for Hui, the intermediary, to have a son? His son is several years old, at least in his 30s, and they are still on a blind date.

Feilu really keeps up with current events

It's really standard at the beginning of Feilu City. . 100 Million in cash, a first-class house from Tomson, Lamborghini*, body strengthening, and Chinese martial arts. It's too buggy for you, an orphan who graduated with financial aid, to suddenly have these things. It can be said that the system is unreasonable to solve everything. Other books can force explanations like this, but yours is not very good. The sense of peacekeeping is too strong, especially the plot of meeting with the sponsor. It is suggested that the starting reward can be changed to reward hundreds of thousands to one million. The current starting point is too high**.

Author, don't always write about subscription at the end of each chapter. If you write well, then I don't think you have to say that everyone will take the initiative to subscribe. If you write about subscription at the end of each chapter, it will affect the reading experience. I hope the author will change it.

I don't want to read Chapter 16 anymore! Can't I write a book without writing about charity?

It looks okay from the front, but too watery from the back.

Don't write so many words at the end of the chapter. I feel very annoyed after each chapter. I really don't want to read it after it's released. I listen to books. There are too many words at the end of chapters, which affects listening to books.

It started out fine, but then the plot turned into an investigation case.

I didn't know that Su Zheng was brother Zheng at the beginning, but I knew it in the middle, and I didn't know it again at the end. This is written

Broly transforms into green hair, why is it blonde?

Author, I think you are like a walking half million!

It feels like a stupid start. In the information society, even though you have covered yourself, it is stupid to use your own phone to report. Furthermore, you have already reported it. Why do you think that the platform will not check your information directly? You want to kill them. The live broadcast platform has your information, and you don't have a golden finger like the system. People are checking your affairs every minute. Why do you think you won't be discovered?

Lan knew about Morfin's existence, or she was responsible for Morfin's promotion.

About Zheng Ge's book "City: Reporting WeChat Business at the Beginning, I Become a Top Ranker" Chapter 18 The elevator incident continues to ferment! Fourth update, please comment on the chapter.

After Chapter 290, this becomes a case study, the contrast is too great. *

If the protagonist wants to release the caged bird Byakugan, he may be snatched at any time. The Byakugan does not have as many restrictions as the Sharingan. A non-Uchiha transplant will have serious side effects. The side effects of the Byakugan are very small. You can use it as you like. You think Hinata is not dying fast enough. Danzo Raikage likes it too much. Can you please consider Hinata's mood?

Is it genuine? There are so many typos, are you serious? Paying money just to read typos?

Regarding "Live Broadcast" written by Patrolman: Isn't it reasonable for fishermen to catch torpedoes? Chapter 19: I have money and a house, my parents are busy, and I have a younger sister at home. Chapter review.

About Chapter 45 of "Happiness: I, Fang Yifan, picked up Song Qian drunk at the beginning" written by Shenlong Catfish Chongtian, lock the lock and call daddy! Chapter review.