Let You Improve the Saber, Not Let You Cut the Tank

The subject matter is quite right, but Huang Rongbai made it too easy, and it suddenly became a bit boring.

Pure garbage novels are rare even in Flying Donkey.

It's too slow. No one will watch it slowly.

What about upgrading equipment? It's not your personal thing. How do you explain it has been upgraded?

The first half is okay, but the middle part is just making fun of it.

Don't you read it after you finish writing it? A supersonic submarine with a speed of 100 kilometers per hour? My head hurts from looking at it

Let you be the commander and train special forces. The 10 kilometers are all trained by special forces.

The supporting character has a problem with his or her IQ. The whole world is called "Naruto". No one would have thought of such an obvious hint?

Is there anyone watching in the water like this?

It's still good, but I don't know how many movies called Jiangnan I've watched.

The recent plot writing is not very good, a bit watery, and the progress is very slow.

In the country of Wu, there are ten thousand men. They are all good names, but there is no sense of substitution at all.

If you play Thor, people in that world don't know Genshin Impact

Sad Max Under the Swamp of Gaia Yunikin Kaipu Rusi Basaku

Chapter 69 feels a bit poisonous and embarrassing to watch. Isn't it boring to be slapped in the face from behind? You said that if the seniors don't doubt it, after all, from a perceptual point of view, if you go in and draw the drawings, who would believe it. If you draw it, what do you want to express? And I don't like plots that are too high-profile. If you can draw them, why do you say them when there is no result? It's like talking big words. The specific meaning is this, after all, it is chaotic.

Feilu doesn't have any more normal books?

I am really speechless as the author writes

Commentary on Chapter 1: A Dragon Maid Falls from the Sky, written by Lao Husi Luanxiang, "Zong Manhua; Girls All Want Me to Preach and Instruct".

The sea refers to nautical miles, and 1 nautical mile is not 1 kilometer long.

Young girls who have just been recruited can have access to core secrets. Let alone conscripts. When they first enter the military camp, the first rule is obedience and the second rule is confidentiality. **The author uses the type to attract attention and refund my 30 yuan.

The author has to refer to what he has written before in each chapter. It feels like there are a lot of repeated sentences.

What did you say about Shen Nong?

Why does the protagonist's father have such a personality? It's too annoying...

He is such a big man, and having his son and wife to worry about him all day long is really speechless.

Comments on the chapters of "Star Iron: The Second Creation Turns in Circles, and the Black Tower Creation Flyes" written by Egg Soaked Twist 22. Sister Jizi, nice to meet you.

Comments on Chapter 2: The Fourth Level of the Mortal Realm, Amplification System, "Deduction of the National Destiny of the Nation: The Beginning of the Thirty-six Transformations of the Tao Realm" written by me Chasing Water in the Sky.

Chapter 136: Wen Jiu Shang Qing Tian's book "Date with a female anchor and was imprisoned together, so she cried in anger" Chapter 136: Weren't you quite arrogant before? (Please subscribe) Chapter review.

Regarding Xiaobai's inability to write fantasy, "Urban Drama: The Beginning Starts in the Feng Xiaoyuan" 030 From a little bit, it became a billion points (please give me flowers, please vote for evaluation, please ask for monthly votes) Chapter review.

Comments on Chapter 5 Datian Er: It turns out that the clown is myself (please give me flowers and collect it) written by Xin Gui in "Hong Kong Film: Animal Master, Get the Black Widow at the Beginning".

About Chapter 29 of "All People Enter the Era of Interstellar Colonization" written by Duan Gengsuan Shicm: Occupy the ruins of civilization and reap the rewards! Chapter review.