Urban: Saving a Genius Campus Belle from the Start

There is a book about a woman jumping off a building. The protagonist said a few words, "You are about to jump off the building, can you stay with me for a night?", "Jump, I will go down quickly, maybe you can still warm up." Then the woman didn't dare to dance anymore.

This book is a rare good book for Fei Lu. Even in the office, one can become a level 4 or even level 5 author with this book. However, there are some places where the writing style is not good enough, and I read the author's comments that the later part of the book is probably about Neptune's love life, which will reduce the quality of the book. I suggest the author change it to business war, and use charm to attract the heroine, but don't write too much about business war. It appears occasionally, but you must master the writing style, otherwise it will collapse directly. There are also suggestions for books to be around 600,000 to 800,000 words, so that you won't get bored. After all, millions of urban, everyday platinum writers may not write well. And it's easy to adapt. It's not about big productions, but if someone adapts it, it can definitely earn hundreds of thousands. However, this is based on the fact that there are no big poisonous points in the later stage, and the author has good potential. It is recommended to practice writing in Feilu, and then go to Zhengzheng to test the water, and finally go to Dian. I don't say how it is, it is definitely more promising than this.

Personally, I really like this book. I think the author portrayed the male protagonist very well. The first scene where the heroine jumps off the building is also great, and the plots seen in the early stages are particularly good. But when the author put it on the shelves, he said that the male protagonist would alternate between several female protagonists. I think it's better not to use it. Because the male protagonist portrayed in the early stage is relatively strong and charming, he has the capital and the female protagonists are actively attracted to him. As for the female characters in the early stage, they were actually reduced to dimensions by the male protagonist. It was the male protagonist who cooperated with them to express themselves. So I hope that when writing later, the author will focus on the male protagonist's personal conflict in the mall or other conflicts to attract the female protagonists, instead of being the time dominator among several female protagonists. It's a bit retarded, and I'm tired of watching this kind of plot. I think this book is well written and can be made into a TV series. It will definitely be more interesting than Korean dramas.

Chicken Soup is very didactic and very obvious, especially in the last few chapters. It feels less like a novel and more like a collection of Chicken Soup short stories or an autobiography. It seems that your plot was developed for the emergence of Chicken Soup. As for me, it looks a bit fake and empty. How can I put it, for now, it is a pity to abandon it if it is tasteless. It is a waste of money to read it. It is a pity not to read it. It is a family opinion and has nothing to do with others.

As mentioned in the title, how bad is the pig's trotter?

The first book to be finished

This is not a cool article at all. This is probably the wrong area for men to post.

I have read nearly a thousand books. This one impressed me the most. If anyone sees it, believe me, it is worth reading.

How is this book? Brothers.

For the sake of your health, the author, I will not vote, and I will not let you process it. I will let you continue to maintain your health. I am such a good person. If you vote, if you continue to add more updates and tire yourself out, what will you do?