In DanMachi: Is There Anything Wrong with Being a Sword Immortal?
人在地错：当剑仙有错吗
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 335k Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
154Chapters
2.5MReads
28.4kFlowers
10.0Score
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Reader comments 50
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Stop worrying about your lame emotional dramas. Your emotional drama level is more suitable for writing bulldozers.
How should I put it, the author, before the protagonist joined the Hestia Familia, the relationship between him and the Loki Familia didn't feel like much. After joining the Hestia Familia, it gave me the feeling that the protagonist has been avoiding bonds with the Loki Familia. It can be said that he is familiar with them. He was just like a familiar stranger, but when Hestia arrived, something suddenly changed. It could be said that he gave everything he had to Hestia. Whether it was people or money, it was equivalent to giving it to Hestia. Hestia did nothing, just said family, and got everything the protagonist had.
The first impression Hestia gave me was that she was unreliable. I won't say the reason, but everyone knows it. It's not that I don't like her. After all, who doesn't like her with twin ponytails and big breasts? I just simply don't like his setting. I'm reading novels. , It all requires a sense of immersion. The protagonist gives me a strong sense of immersion. Loki gives me a feeling of home, and I am also a bit lonely. I really hope that the author can change him back to the Loki family. If he is changed back, I am willing to make some compensation.
At first he was said to be ten times weaker than the main character in the original work, but in the next two days he went down to level 16. Even though he had been training for two years, his poor handling of the plot was just self-indulgence.
When will you become an immortal, when will you reward me with monthly votes and flowers.
I feel like as a protagonist, this upgraded attribute is a bit too much.
Although I felt something was going to happen to Anna, I didn't expect to die. Is it okay to write like this?
After reading your introduction, I decided not to read it.
Sword Name, Sword Name, Sword Name, Skill, I keep adding the name of the sword in front of it. Is it just to make up for the number of words?
It's like a self-pleasure during the second grade of middle school, a bit embarrassing