
In an Anime Crossover: Starting with a Star-Creation Simulation
人在综漫:开局一个模拟创星图
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 505k Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
240Chapters
3.4MReads
167.6kFlowers
10.0Score
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With the simulated star creation diagram, at least the body's surface level will be strengthened to an explosive star level to be able to withstand it, right? Even if you go to Demon High School, you must be at least a Transcendent or an Infinite Dragon God, right? Why don't you do something that ordinary people's bodies can't perform? If you see it, please reply. It's too weak and I won't read it~
There are quite a few flaws. The first protagonist killed a priest and was kicked out. If the priest dies, he dies, and the protagonist is not irreplaceable. Are fallen angels really blind? The protagonist has improved his strength in a short period of time. If you don't see that he is a potential stock, you can just drive him out. This is pushing talents out. The second female protagonist is too extreme, and it feels like she was created just to make the male protagonist a villain. Obviously an apology can solve the problem. The author's Rias is going to kill the protagonist. Forget it Lias. The same goes for Shitori Sona. His teammate was injured. Didn't he immediately ask about the force and why? Later, when he was attacked and defended himself, the first thing he wanted to do was to kill the protagonist as well. It feels like it's an act of intelligence, completely becoming a tool for the protagonist to transform into a villain.
You are given a useless hook at the beginning, the reward level is from white to colorful, the fallen angel loli and the kitten must be collected and must be towards the protagonist. Every time, you open 50-50 and then take out new props to win. The enemy wonders how many trump cards the protagonist has, etc., And this time you deliberately made the protagonist an NT in order to deny his identity (stated in advance that there is no bias in stating the facts), Rias and others' attitude towards you When the field is still in the observation stage and there is no hostility or malice, the protagonist is aggressive, directly asking them to give way, not being a family member, not being a family member, and then yelling at them, which directly worsens the relationship between the two parties. Later, he sneaks into the school and deliberately ignores the patrollers, causing the other party to suspect them. After the war, he still looks like he is being forced. Let me ask you, a person whose true strength is unknown sneaks into your territory and wanders around but ignores you. What do you think? Are you still being chauvinistic every day, forgetting that you are just a freeloader when you have no strength? Obviously the protagonist has a problem himself
Also, in order to describe the protagonist without "licking", you blindly write the protagonist as a villain, which is obviously a misunderstanding. In the end, in order to write about the protagonist's masculinity, you insist on not explaining it, and you are so offended that you said you provoked me in the first place. I was just a passive counterattack. Are you sure that what you wrote is not some kind of naocan, logic master?
She would rather choose Naruse Mio as her friend than Rias. Rias is too utilitarian and she still uses her family members for any unscrupulous purpose. God is a family member and is still a servant at heart, so she still gives them orders to carry out.
Rias doesn't seem to be that aggressive in the original novel.
Anyway, I am very disgusted with Rias, the female leader. There was someone who wrote about this before, and everyone knew it was a pornographic article. After all, they are always cheating on each other, and most of them are happy to do so. When Rias and Cheng brother met and came into contact for the first time, they could be honest with each other, hug each other and sleep together. If Makoto is not the descendant of the Sekiryuutei, maybe Rias just gave him a favor for Kiba Yuuto, who is better and stronger than Makoto in every aspect except strength. Brother Cheng also successfully cornered Rias' brother Sirzechs. Brother Cheng is really a ruthless man who wants women over their lives. At first, Makoto just wanted to repay his kindness, but later his nature changed after Rias gave him the gift of bubbles. In this way, it becomes a cuckold's life. It's fine if you look at it, just be the other half. After all, no one wants to have a green head above their head.
The label "Shuangwen" is like a joke, there is no feeling of happiness at all. Shuangwen should not have any plots that are first suppressed and then improved. Isn't it true that some people feel that they have been slapped in the face, and they will be happy if they give him three slaps after a while?
The protagonist's character is too double-standard. He has no power to eat soft food. He is arrogant when he has cheats. He is chauvinistic every day. He is also shameless and hypocritical. He runs to the devil's territory as an enemy force, but he still pretends to be innocent and says that he was forced to fight back. What a beautiful country!
You won't give a super powerful ability at the beginning, but it will be weakened or have restrictions on its use.