Honkai: Star Rail: Teacher Xuzhao, You Don't Want to Lose Money Either, Do You?

Well, how should I put it? The Honkai Impact universe is so vast, and even if Earth-based works have a lot of competition, Honkai Impact 3rd is not only huge but also full of talented people, making it difficult to stand out through plagiarism. For example, Mushroom's works initially had very few readers.

I know you wanted to give the protagonist a driving force for plagiarism, but there really was no need to use such a passive identity as a "phantom species." Even though I know that resolving this issue could be done with just a word from the author, it doesn't change the fact that the initial impression wasn't good.

The following is the official history of the Star Gods of the A generation, as recorded by a fictional historian: Aha: Can I pursue you? (Half-jokingly) Akivili: You can't outrun me, believe it or not (serious face jpg) (Bang! Collision creates the universe) Aha: He's not dead, he just cheated on his wife. #(Funny) Firstly, pleasure can break down the fourth wall and engage in dialogue with us; secondly, my point is: Aha's failure to find Avi likely doesn't mean he's dead. Maybe Akivilli created a dimension, bringing the game into reality. That's why everyone says the Trail Blazers have that Akivilli vibe. To put it romantically, Akivili (the pioneers) represents us in reality. That's why Aha said it was his fault for making the universe too boring and failing to leave us (the end?). Aren't everything the players experience outside the game just their real lives outside the pioneering Honkai Impact universe? At the start, Nanuk (Ongsingbeyer) took a look, and suddenly realized that his endless cycle of gacha pulls had finally yielded "The Savior from Beyond the Heavens".

Is there a female lead?

Teacher Xu Zhao, I still remember you. #(Funny)

The writing is alright. But I hope you won't have any more instances of characters having an advantage but not using it, instead openly and fairly competing with cunning and underhanded street urchins. Maybe you should strengthen the villains a bit. On one hand, you try your best to belittle the villains, while on the other hand, you're all getting along famously with the protagonist, and then you have to find excuses to make the protagonist's actions uncomfortable to watch.

It's alright. I think this book is pretty good so far, and I'll keep reading. As long as the illness doesn't relapse and disrupt reality later on...

Keep it up, at least this isn't a book that's just riding the coattails of a trending topic.

It's alright. The writing style is just too immature. Keep it up! #(Funny)