
Sukuna Wants to Possess Me? Sorry, Yhwach Is Inside
宿傩想夺舍?抱歉,里面是友哈巴赫
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 240k Words
- Genre
- Paranormal & Unknown
- Updated
- 9d ago
- English
- Request a translation
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57Chapters
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112Favorites
113Recommendations
4Reviews
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I've read about five chapters, and it feels too stream-of-consciousness; I can't understand the plot development at all, and the characters' actions are very abstract. If it continues like this, the grades probably won't be very good.
The dialogue feels too AI-driven. The characters' conversations are so concise, it's like they're writing a report; there's absolutely no tone, no emotion, no subjective consciousness, and no inner feelings.
Sorry, this is my first time writing a book and I'm a bit inexperienced. As you can probably tell, the writing style is somewhat similar to Ryohgo Narita's official Bleach novels. The first ten chapters were indeed a bit too stream-of-consciousness, and I've already revised them once. If it's not showing up, please refresh the page. (┌·ω·)┌✧
It's too stream-of-consciousness and a bit disorganized. Keep it up!