Honkai: My Character Card System Has Broken Me!

Japanese people are nice

It's so annoying when someone knocks on the door every time something exciting happens. Also, don't think of Kiana as innocent; someone who can say things like "drinking sister" should stop knocking all the time. I want to see what happens next.

This book, with tens of thousands of copies sold, only proves that Hedgehog Cat is indeed doomed.

The character dialogue is terrible, it's so awkward. And why did you have to name this character Mei? Characters with the same name are so easy to confuse. Couldn't you have used a similar name? For example, in Genshin Impact, Thor is called Shadow. You could just call him Thunder Movie. Or Thor's sister could be called True, Thunder True. But you named her Mei, the Forgotten River Hand—doesn't that sound awkward to yourself?

The system settings are utter garbage, and the quests treat the protagonist like a puppet.

[Stacking armor, not that I can't write] Wouldn't writing it being pushed along by the system be too direct? #(Question mark) It feels a bit like the protagonist is a puppet of the system, with weak subjective will.

The rambling, uninteresting plot and constant questioning are ridiculous. The part-time job is like a nanny managing everything, asking about everything, trying to uncover every detail about the protagonist. If you give them face, they answer every question, spoiling them with bad habits. Not joining St. Freya wouldn't have been a problem. This book is actually erotic; too much plot is pointless. Also, regarding the Japanese character, I didn't feel anything, nor did I feel any split personality. And then there's another character...

Am I the only one drawn in by the cover? #(You know what I mean)

A sense of human-machine interaction

This protagonist is utterly trash, and the system is incredibly weak!! I don't even know why you wrote it like this! It's so poorly written, and there's only one character from Honkai Impact 2! Instead of quickly strengthening the protagonist, you constantly send your clones away from him? And the main body goes near characters stronger than the protagonist?? Do you really think Fu Hua is a good person?! But the main body isn't strong, and he's always hanging around under people's noses. Plus, he's rather suspicious! Fu Hua just hasn't figured out the main body's strength yet and is slightly wary of Mei from Honkai Impact 2. If there's even the slightest opening, Fu Hua will attack instantly…