Type-Moon: Two Holy Maidens Have Arrived, Please Collect Them
型月，您有两位圣女到账请查收
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- 742k Words
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- Free Fanfiction
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- 14h ago
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Okay, how about you give the male protagonist a revelation skill later on? That way, it won't be considered impulsive. Gudako has poison resistance because of her contract with Mash, so having a revelation skill through her contract with Jeanne d'Arc would fit the setting. It would prevent the story from suddenly turning from a cautious style to a reckless one.
Author, could you please have the protagonist sacrifice himself to save everyone in the finale, dying in front of Jeanne d'Arc (White) and Jeanne d'Arc (Black)? Before dying, he tries to embrace them, but in the end, he turns into golden particles and dissipates. As he runs towards the two Jeannes, he shouts that in some future era, they will definitely meet again (thinking to himself, "I must always remember these two girls. In the next life and the era after that, we must meet again"). After saying this, he turns into golden particles and dissipates, and then the protagonist's reincarnation summons Jeanne d'Arc.
Author, what exactly are you trying to write? I'm definitely looking forward to seeing a chaotic love triangle.
The protagonist seemed overly emotional, with too many exclamation marks in a single sentence.
Is Bai Zhen a good girl?
I hope there will be less repetition of things that have already been said or happened; there's too much unnecessary content in each chapter... And I hope the plot can be sped up a bit.
The character suddenly becomes a lecherous jerk later on, which clashes with the cautious persona he developed earlier.
It's so beautiful! The arrangement of Rin and Sakura is also very interesting, and Sada is beautiful too.
It's pretty good. From the beginning to the middle and later stages, the protagonist's actions and language changed more than three times, deviating a bit from the established plot. Overall, it's not bad. I suggest not describing the protagonist's past background. Readers who finish the story will look for you describing the consequences of past actions, making it extremely easy to mess up.
Author, please don't only update one chapter a day, update more chapters!