Yukikaze, Witness to the Sea

It's been a long time since I've read your book; you've made great progress. I'll just give a brief review. First of all, the story is well-written in terms of its plausibility. It's clear that you've done specialized research on the Meiji period (or did you study these things before?). The social atmosphere, geography, people, weapons, and medicines are all consistent with the historical context. One thing that pleased me was that the protagonist didn't recklessly rewrite history just because he had a cheat ability. Instead, he considered the butterfly effect (this can also be seen in the villains and some NPCs you wrote; they all have brains and aren't stupid). The protagonist also considers the possible consequences of his actions on ordinary people (and even relatives like Hanako's family). This is a good aspect of the setting. The protagonist has a high moral standard, so it's natural for him to think about these things, which is very reasonable. Then, the scene descriptions are also very good and consistent with the society at that time. It's clear that this isn't a cheap time-travel novel, but more like a historical novel (of course, these two aspects can be reflected in one article). As I mentioned above, the background completely follows real history, and the protagonist has enough respect for history but doesn't intend to drastically change it. On this basis, the description of the social scene becomes very important. The closer the description is to the real history, the more realistic the article becomes (of course, the rationality of the protagonist's behavior must also be considered). You did a good job in this regard. The influence of some social trends at that time, such as Marxism, is also written, which has a real impact on the social landscape. Finally, I have some questions. Since the protagonist intends to be a witness to history, will the narrative style become more like a road movie? For example, traveling to more countries, meeting all kinds of people with different personalities, depicting more social landscapes, human geography, and wars, while the protagonist is not only recording but also growing during this time, something like that? (P. S.: I don't use Hedgehog Cat, I downloaded it specifically to read your articles. I didn't reply to your QQ message because it had been too long and I was a little embarrassed to reply (you know what I mean). It's very well written. I guess you have ideas for the plot. Write confidently and boldly at your own pace. The important thing for a long novel is to polish it slowly. I'll come back to check your updates from time to time.)

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The writing is very pleasant, keep it up!

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There aren't many words, I'll leave it for later. By the way, could you please tell me about Shan Baijia?

I'll come back to check on it after a while, don't let it die! #(Cute)#(cute)

Waaaaah, author, please update soon! I'm too scared to raise them anymore! (Crying) I'm afraid they'll die.

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