Lin Yunbai's parents were alive and well, and he was getting by in life. His job was a little grueling, but he was satisfied with his life. Even so, a speeding truck sent him transmigrating to another world.
He found himself transmigrated into Bleach as an ordinary Soul Reaper assigned to guard the living world. His name had also become Kobayashi Yunbai. When in Rome, do as the Romans do! But what the heck were all these spirits outside? There were spirits all over the streets. What had the previous Soul Reaper been doing on duty?
Just as Yunbai diligently worked as a Soul Reaper, purifying spirits, he met a girl. She told him her name was Miko Yotsuya. Only then did Yunbai realize he seemed to have landed in the wrong series! But what could he do? There was no going back!
PS: This book has original fanfic additions to Mieruko-chan, so some details may differ from what you expect, especially since the original's worldbuilding isn't very clear. Please don't rush to criticize. I'll do my best to make it all fit.
It's so baffling. Those who came for the Bleach story can leave now. He can't even use his Shikai and a simple katana to guard the Human World? And then there's this whole "because he suspects the previous leader has someone protecting him and he's afraid of being thrown into prison as a scapegoat" thing, so he's not contacting Soul Society anymore? Don't you have a captain? How many chapters have you even updated? Even those dozen or so chapters are supposedly original. If it weren't for your name and description, would we be here to read your original work? It feels like you actually wanted to write something original, but then realized it would be a flop, so you just fused together two different worlds to attract readers. Then, in chapter 20+, it suddenly reveals, "Ah, so the protagonist is a transmigrator!" What a surprise!
Having read over two hundred chapters, I can confirm that the author is a pretentious, pretentious idiot who suppresses the protagonist's fighting power. He deliberately creates a corrupting narrative that weakens the protagonist's abilities, refusing to act alongside those around him who are being watched, and then even letting that underworld messenger, the goat-headed monster, escape. The plot is utterly disgusting.
It's supposed to be about death, but the characters are weak, the battle scenes aren't exciting or intense, it's not a romance or slice-of-life story, and it's supposed to be a horror novel, but it's neither scary nor mysterious. What exactly are you trying to write?
#(Angry) If you wrote this book with AI, you should at least read it once before publishing it! Chapters 30 and 31, maybe twice 🧠 The plot of mutual fighting is speechless 😅 We knew earlier that it wasn't in Bleach, then in chapter 30 it said to go to the Sky Town to repair the artificial body, and in chapter 31 it said that you could use the Azure Fire Fall to that point, but then it said you could only use the Crimson Fire Cannon. This book deserves to be rejected.
Ample resources are a privilege of the strong. The protagonist's reckless actions, especially when he can't even unleash his Zanpakuto, are questionable – is he out of his mind or just plain crazy? But so far, the book is alright for me.
Fighting an elite monster and getting this bad, I've been frustrated for over 30 chapters. Everything's no good. I need to run, I need to lure it away, but oh dear, my body can't unleash its full potential. After all that, even with all my strength, I'm still only 40/60 against the elite monster. Is this some kind of power-down strategy? I just ate a bunch of mobs, going from one-star mobs to two-star elite monsters, and then I'm just barely holding on. This kind of frustrating story is so outdated.
I quite like the premise; it's like a character with the abilities of a regular Grim Reaper transported to the world of Miko. However, the protagonist is rather pathetic, like a clueless college graduate struggling to find a job. His personality is characterized by a lack of perseverance, a tendency to drift along, mediocrity, and a lack of critical thinking—the kind of character who, without superpowers, would be the first to die from his own stupidity in a horror movie. If you can overlook the protagonist's foolishness, you might want to give it a try.
I read the free chapters, but they weren't very good. As the only Shinigami, in terms of money: livestreaming is too tacky. Wouldn't being an exorcist be better? One session would be worth a year's worth of livestreaming. In terms of strength: if you don't improve your strength and just go around exorcising spirits, you'd be killed long ago if it weren't for the protagonist's halo. And instead of idly developing the abilities of an original character like Amamiya Mio, you should probably develop Miko's abilities instead—she's the original female lead, definitely better than your weak and pretentious idea.
I'm disgusted. The first time I saw that evil spirit, the protagonist wanted to deal with it at night. The protagonist knew he was being targeted by the evil spirit, but he just made up an excuse, "I don't want to work." His real intention was to mess with the female ghost and make the evil spirit evolve. Then the protagonist felt frustrated. What kind of writing is this? The protagonist's intelligence depends on the author. The protagonist is supposed to be an adult. I learned in middle school that when a problem arises, you have to deal with it. But the protagonist is just there being all lovey-dovey with the ghost girl. Why don't you go and kill the evil spirit while you're in your prosthetic body? The female ghost is no match for it either. Why don't you take advantage of the time to kill the evil spirit that's targeting you? If you keep dragging it out, won't the evil spirit come after you? #(Vomit)
Having read over two hundred chapters, I can confirm that the author is a pretentious, pretentious idiot who suppresses the protagonist's fighting power. He deliberately creates a corrupting narrative that weakens the protagonist's abilities, refusing to act alongside those around him who are being watched, and then even letting that underworld messenger, the goat-headed monster, escape. The plot is utterly disgusting.