"Name the heroes who brought the alien races back to this continent and helped them coexist peacefully with humanity, and explain why they are the Dragon Knight, the beloved of the Progenitor, the Great Witch's teacher, and the great Lich, Lord Qianye."
"You're a lich?" The Supreme Dragon, the Progenitor of the Blood Clan, and the Transcendent Great Witch formed a circle around the black-haired girl at the center, pressing her with questions.
"You never believed me in the first place..." Qianye, feeling utterly weak, tugged her collar higher to cover the mark on her collarbone, then pushed the exam paper in front of her as far away as she could.
"So you don't deny that those two are your lovers, either!?" (X3)
And so, as Qianye looked at the three lovers in front of her, she gave an awkward smile.
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Is this protagonist a 0 or a 1?
I've read two volumes. The book's poor performance isn't just because it's an original work, but also because... It's incredibly frustrating. Throughout both volumes, the protagonist is constantly on the defensive, being schemed against by one person and another. Crucially, the protagonist doesn't retaliate or lacks the ability to do so. It doesn't feel like a lich who's lived for a thousand years; it's like he's wasted his life. The protagonist's every move is under the villain's surveillance and calculation, which is incredibly frustrating. Then, although the protagonist was given high-level combat power, he was either absent from battle and the maids and students were beaten half to death or covered in wounds, barely managing to win. This plot arrangement didn't offer anything satisfying, making me frown as I skimmed through the pages until I found a turning point.
800,000 words? Is this the destiny of originality...?
I've finished the first volume so far and will subscribe to the entire series. The overall impression is quite good, and the setting is interesting, but the protagonist's abilities as a thousand-year-old lich aren't really shown directly. In the first volume, most of the time he uses his abilities by chanting spells like Rococo or simply strolling around, giving the impression of someone who used a small wooden stick a thousand years ago, and now, after a thousand years of evolution, uses a small wooden stick with special effects. Could you try adding more layers of background information or using a third-party perspective to highlight the protagonist's strength? I think that would be more interesting. #(Love you!)
I enjoyed watching it, but like I said, the paragraphs are too long. This really needs to be changed; it affects the reading experience.
Is the main character the top or the main character the bottom?
The paragraphs are a bit too long; four or five lines on average is considered long. CWM readers generally prefer lower information density.
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Is the cover featuring Liulichuan?