I'm a Pirate in Honkai: Star Rail

It is neither Star Iron nor a pirate.

If you can't write, then don't even try. What kind of garbage are you writing? The protagonist's character is neither completely bad nor purely good. The character is out of character. Have you even read the stuff you wrote?

I've read over 300 chapters, but I don't recommend it. What's most disgusting is that he keeps writing "yes, yes ... 1. The bird being kidnapped at the beginning is illogical. 2. His expression changed immediately after saving people. 3 Are you useless? Even in this situation, you still let the little bird get its neck injured in a one-on-one fight? 4. What makes you think you can rule the entire planet by leaving behind just one or two children? 5. A companion who encountered Huang Quan in the void initially changed his attitude upon hearing Huang Quan's absence, preparing to rob him. However, upon seeing Huang Quan, his attitude instantly changed again – disgusting. Persecuting the third uncle is fine, eliminating powerful players prematurely for the sake of winning a game is acceptable, but it's not like I'm the one blocking the bridge at Uluru without any driftwood. But why do you even steal a child's happiness? It's clearly stated that Hook only wanted to win the championship to pay for his father's medical treatment, yet you still let him lose. And the company snatched the summoning coin from the child. The child found it, but it's possible that it originally belonged to the company. You didn't even explain clearly who that B actually belongs to. It was written directly that Toppa and his men went to guard the border. There are also things like stealing other players' luck to make your own character unlucky. Most importantly, they always say "yes, yes, yes, yes" in their sentences. It's really disgusting.

Die in Belleberg

As a pirate, you don't even have your own ship, yet you steal someone else's train. You're pleasing neither side—you're truly invincible.

When writing fanfiction, you must understand the original work's setting; otherwise, the writing will seem nonsensical.

I glanced at the children's section, and the author clearly loves Belleburg. They've devoted over 100 chapters to describing Belleburg, but the total amount of plot about them seems less than what's actually in Belleburg itself.

The comments section is way more interesting than the book! 🤣

I have a small suggestion for the author: the title could be changed. It doesn't feel like a space pirate story at all. I feel that changing it to a slice-of-life story would be more suitable. P. S.: This comment is not malicious and is purely my personal opinion.

It feels like watching a tomato.