Orimoto Hakugen's Classroom of the Elite

Short review. Is the protagonist a saint? To be honest, I felt inexplicably annoyed when the protagonist helped Sakura. Always helping others unprovoked and proactively—you really are a great philanthropist. Is being an orphan enough to make you feel sorry for yourself and crave care? It's not that this kind of protagonist is bad; frankly, he's just a normal, kind, ordinary person. "Because you're selfless and kind, I'll help you selflessly"—that's so cliché. I thought a protagonist with high intelligence would have a highly rational core, but instead, he's outwardly strong but inwardly weak. From his monologue with the vending machine, all I can see is his fragile and immature heart. I can already foresee some woman noticing his sorrow, listening to his troubles, comforting him, and eventually, they'll get together.

It's disgusting that Class D was promoted to Class A; it benefited a bunch of scum and tea pillars. The protagonist has no real attachment to Class D. If he cared about a random group, he'd probably be dead in some gangster's office by now. Why would he lead someone to an A class instead of transferring them? The protagonist doesn't have the same need to play dumb as Ayanokouji.

In the Suto assault case, can items found with Ishizaki's blood in the karaoke room really be considered evidence? The entire logic is very flawed. First, there are many places without security cameras, such as the men's restroom or the rooms at Longyuan. You don't necessarily need to go to a karaoke bar. Also, karaoke bars are often crowded. It's easy to notice that Ishizaki only had minor injuries when he went in, but came out with much worse injuries. You don't even need to look for bloodstains; just find someone who witnessed it. Secondly, Longyuan is a bad influence; they understand very well how to cause injuries that appear severe. There may not necessarily be bleeding. For example, they might punch someone in the back or abdomen, creating what appears to be a serious injury. Third, even if there is blood, it cannot be considered evidence of further assault; it could be said that the blood was shed while the bandage was being applied in the karaoke room.

I mean, something's missing. Where are the Jinchuriki from the Class Academy?

The current fanfiction about Class D is already a major flaw, because it's impossible to avoid the antics of the idiotic homeroom teacher. To be honest, its class division system is practically no different from India's caste system.

I couldn't even finish the first part. With the male lead's character, you can guess what happens later—he'll probably become a pretentious, self-pitying, empty-hearted, harem-building type. To write a male protagonist who is highly intelligent, emotionally empty, insecure, and yearning for care, the beginning must be normal. Whether it's a cool exterior or an optimistic and helpful attitude, he should be ordinary, but definitely not a self-pitying, artsy type.

The plot of the story is acceptable, and the character development is also fine. It's a pity that the artsy type had the protagonist fall in love with a vending machine. A single chapter describing that broken vending machine would have been enough, but instead, the published chapters repeatedly and extensively described it. It's upsetting, I have to get this off my chest. There's a reason for the poor data, so please subscribe with caution.

I read ten chapters. I didn't see anything wrong with the first eight, but the ninth chapter, where Horikita pricks the protagonist with a compass and draws blood, is really hard to describe. There's no emotional buildup; it just throws in a typical Japanese anime trope, which is really hard to watch.

Okay, it really isn't good-looking, that's why it got so few clicks.

The writing is incredibly tedious. They could spend four or five chapters just writing about Chi Kuanzhi and the others struggling to get to the toilet. It's a good thing the book isn't popular; it would be strange if it were. This kind of tired, over-written plot keeps dragging on, with the main character only making minor appearances for over ten chapters in a row.