Band Girls Always Want to Date Me

I'd like to see how long you can keep this up. It's all slice-of-life, with not a single twist or exciting moment. Look at that book, "I'm a Stranger to the Music Girl," it's also about three teams, look at what that one is written. Yours is even more sloppy than "Prison Sea" (vomit).

Putting everything else aside, Aine in this story gives me a really annoying feeling. She always likes to bother the male lead for no reason, like a useless sidekick in a horror movie who likes to trigger plot points.

As things stand, I'm going all in on KKR, betting on KKR to be the first to clear the game.

KKR has already taken down the mountain, although it was just a kiss. When will KSM get a chance to play?

Generally speaking, the protagonist's temper is too good, ummmm. It seems like protagonists in music-related stories are all very good-natured, giving off a nanny vibe. Also, after reading so many similar fanfictions, characters like Su Shi are indeed very annoying. Isn't there a single one where the protagonist actually scolds her?

Two million words can be abandoned?

Without considering Xiangzi as a character who needs to win over a woman, I feel the following ending is the cruelest for him: After the band broke up, they started to cut ties with the past, and the vegetarian food and Hatsune Miku egg carvings ran away on their own. Wanting to forget everything, she went back to being a carefree young lady, only to find after a few days that the Toyokawa family had either suffered a major upheaval and gone bankrupt, or that Old Deng had been stripped of power because of his illegitimate daughter, making her a real pauper this time. In the end, she had to go back to see her drunken son, Nakaden, go crazy, and her mentality collapsed. Completely abandoning her dreams and self-respect, she became an alcoholic and overworked office worker a few years later. While drinking at an izakaya, she saw the news on TV about the girls' sudden rise to fame and drowned her sorrows in alcohol.

Seriously, would the old group and GBC accept it?

Endless Shennong, come out!

I've read up to the latest chapter, and personally, the plot seems rather bland. However, as I've been following it daily, I haven't encountered any issues where I felt it was boring and didn't want to continue reading. The romantic development is indeed a bit slow, but I can accept that for this book. It feels like a hazy, innocent romance that develops naturally. My only complaint is that the female leads' progress isn't proportional to the male lead's. The female leads (like Li Xi and Ai Yin) are all preparing to form a harem, while the male lead is still trying to persuade them (like Deng) that feelings aren't something that can be rushed. The problem is, Xiao Mu has kissed him so many times; even if he doesn't want the male lead to take the first step in building a harem, he should at least give a positive response. The male lead isn't a blockhead; he understands the female leads' feelings. I hope he can give a positive response soon; any more dragging things out is a bit uncomfortable. I'm not saying it has to be a home run or anything like that. These things should happen naturally, not just for the sake of pushing. But it's best not to write stories where the male lead has to use his willpower to suppress the female lead to create a so-called "doing what's best for the female lead" persona. Like those two books I've read on this site, he talks about doing what's best for the female lead but then does nothing, just suppressing different female leads. If it doesn't come to that, you don't have to write it. It's better to have some tangible achievements, like improving social status. If it's just suppressing for the sake of suppressing, trying to have it both ways, and then ending with a chapter where he pushes everyone down, then please forgive me, I'm not interested. I just hope that every relationship has a complete beginning and an end.