Classroom of the Elite: Starting with Zero Points, Knowing the Plot, I'm Just Going to Lie Flat!

First of all, please forgive me for being a bit harsh, because as a paid reader, I really found it difficult to read. Please note that I am not targeting the plot of your novel, but your writing style. Personally, I think the story and plot you wrote are quite good, otherwise I wouldn't have read more than 170 chapters. But I really can't figure out whether you lack literary skills or are deliberately padding the word count. You keep cramming words that indicate cause and effect or contrast into the beginning of your paragraphs, such as "because," "but," "therefore," "for example," "although," and "moreover," without considering whether the sentences flow smoothly or the logic is correct. As a reader, it's really frustrating to see your writing repeatedly contain incoherent sentences and logical errors, especially since this problem occurs every few paragraphs. To put it bluntly, if you randomly pick a middle school student, and you both write a 400-word essay, whose is more fluent? Don't look at who writes more interestingly or with more literary value, just look at whose sentences flow more smoothly throughout. What's even more unacceptable to me is that this problem is particularly noticeable in the paid chapters. When I was reading the free chapters, it wasn't so bad because I hadn't paid to subscribe, but after reading more than 170 chapters, I really wanted to curse. Let's set aside the question of whether online writers or traditional writers are superior or inferior, but since you make a living from this, can you at least show more respect to the readers who pay to read your work during the writing process? If the frequent grammatical errors and illogical statements in your novel are a matter of your ability, then could you please study more about these areas? If it's not a matter of ability but rather that you're deliberately adding words to pad the word count, then could you at least do it with some skill? If your padding is so clumsy, you might as well just copy and paste "purple sweet potato pudding" extensively into the paid chapters; that way, readers will have a smoother reading experience, and you won't have to resort to such awkwardly cramming in words to pad the word count.

A year ago, I disliked this chapter more and more each time I read it. The entire system spirit, Ichinose, can tolerate the system-based gameplay and get rewards. But writing Kasumigaoka Utaha like this is just too much! Does the author have a grudge against Shiyu? Or does she owe you money? Making eight million yuan a day by selling ideas—this kind of highly toxic operation is something we have to accept, even if we have to hold our noses. They could have just created an original character to play this money-spending brat, but instead, they made Kasumigaoka take the blame. It was purchased despite the precedent of Yamada Elf refusing to buy ideas. Look at how Kasumigaoka is described in this book. A middle school student writes erotic fiction; lacking the ability to write a book, he pays to buy other people's ideas. Add to that ridiculous chuunibyou behavior The original author, Shiwa, was, after all, a beautiful girl who loved literature and longed for romance. I'll turn you into a low-class, tasteless, problematic beauty who writes erotic novels. So how much money does Shiyu owe you that she's written like this?

I couldn't stand it anymore after reading half of it. I paid to read this far, up to the deserted island exam... The protagonist is a complete bastard, he does nothing and doesn't take responsibility, he's so arrogant I can't stand it. I'm dropping the book. Whoever wants a harem novel can read it. #(Vomit)#(blue and sad)

I guess I'm just unlucky.

I wrote a whole bunch of stuff, but gave up. In short: a terrible job.

I just read the first chapter. They adopted five sisters and then expect their son to support them? Are those five sisters disabled? And not only do they have to raise them themselves, but they also expect their son to support them? Are they going to leech off the protagonist after they get married? What is the protagonist's father thinking? Can the author explain this to me?

I can't understand why they suddenly changed it to a soul-swapping story, and specifically Itou Makoto. Even if you wanted a powerful background and a well-integrated worldview, there are plenty of options better than Sawagoe Itsuki's. What can Sawagoe Itsuki rely on? His bunch of ridiculously messy sons? Putting aside how good the background can be, his reputation is already terrible. You're not writing an erotic novel, so what's the point of choosing such a background? There are plenty of better anime and manga companies out there. If you really can't find one, you could use one from a visual novel. Why choose this one? I can't understand it, I really can't understand it. I'm out.

I've never seen a story where they wrote halfway through the main story, then switched to writing side stories and ended up with a terrible ending. #(So sad)

The male lead, this godlike figure, was falsely accused of stealing underwear. Evidence proving the misunderstanding was sent to his phone via text message, but he refused to show it or explain himself. He just wanted the inheritance, so he suffered this humiliation, right? Nino wrongly accused him, and when they met again, it was like nothing had happened. It's laughable; what a piece of garbage plot!

He was castrated. ━━(￣ー￣*|||━━