You Call This Magic?

The root cause is that the protagonist's overpowered ability was poorly chosen. This ability was too omnipotent, practically beyond the author's control. This ability relied entirely on imagination, and when the author's imagination fell short of the reader's, the book naturally became garbage…

What's the meaning of "marrying off" and "giving away a female"? Can anyone explain?

I actually find it hard to accept those who hold the view that "magic is a world of imagination," thinking that as long as you have imagination, everything will be fine. I also think that if the author built this magic system with this kind of thinking, it would be doomed. It would easily slide into a stage of just talking big, with everyone thinking, "I'm stronger than you, I'm the strongest, my cutting is invincible." This would turn into agnosticism, where magic cannot be analyzed, and the so-called cultivation of magic would truly become the development of an "invincible heart," having already accumulated magical power. I just don't understand. The world of Frillian clearly has magical formulas, magical power, and explanations of how to interpret magic, so how did it suddenly become a wish-granting spell just because of the phrase "magic is a world of imagination"? My understanding is that "magic is a world of imagination," and similarly, technology is also a world of imagination. You have an idea, and then you use science to realize it. For example, the magic of flight—airplanes. To some extent, if people couldn't imagine flying, they wouldn't try, and there would be no airplanes. Similarly, in the realm of magic, no matter how much you imagine, when it comes to the material world, there are "magical formulas" that can be realized. A "magical formula" is like a product; through it, you achieve various desired effects, and magic power is the energy source. Of course, this doesn't mean there aren't things I'm considering. There might be enhancing effects, or something similar to Yubel's observation of the cutting effects created by tailors. My personal understanding is that "Enlightenment" might have magical attacks similar to fine tailoring thread—small surface area, high pressure, and so on. Add another layer of armor, but magic is, after all, fictional, and the settings in books sometimes serve the plot entirely. However, if it really becomes a comment section where people rely purely on their imagination to determine how strong someone is, it's too easy for people to say things like, "I think I'm stronger than you," or "I also think I'm stronger than you," and so on. It's like in a forum where people say, "My character has such and such settings, so he's the strongest," while another person thinks, "My character has such and such settings, so he's the strongest." Every time I see the magic in the world of Frillian revolving around "belief," I get really stressed. It's the same phrase repeated a hundred times, but I never see any development of flight magic, offensive magic, or defensive magic.

You should just start thinking about what to write next. This one is basically hopeless; sticking with it will only hurt yourself and others. 🙄

Even though it's finished, let me still leave a comment. Try to be less aggressive That thing labeled "harem" but doesn't actually have one? I suggest you just cut off that two ounces of meat instead of pretending to have one.

This turtle is tagged with #(you know what I mean).

Listen to me, don't read the book, the main text is garbage, the comments section is where the fun is.

It's hilarious; I have absolutely no idea what the author was thinking. Even when I'm in a blissful state after drinking, I couldn't come up with this plot. #(Sad)

I suggest the author learn from this experience and start over.

I've been following this story for a while now, and although the comments section is full of criticism, I personally feel it's not too bad; it doesn't warrant an immediate, furious outburst. The worst part of a novel is sometimes the author's lack of experience, resulting in poor pacing and some scenes that feel nauseating, or the author's limited imagination. While this book isn't great, I still hope the author can finish it and at least tell the whole story. Sometimes, the more I see your book's success, the more afraid you'll just abandon it and betray us readers who've already paid! #(Crying) As long as you dare to write, I'll subscribe, even if it's historical fiction (mainly because the sunk costs are a bit too high).