I Can Review the Story

The story was written quite well before it was released, but after it was published, I found it difficult to read, especially the female supporting characters, who didn't seem like normal people. The one surnamed Ye was alright, just a bit insecure, and there was a possibility of her becoming a yandere; while the one surnamed Xu had a kind of brainstem deficiency beauty, knowing nothing but doing whatever she wanted, not valuing her own life or the lives of those around her, and only realizing her regret when she harmed others; the one surnamed Chen always gave the feeling that she would be involved in an accident at any time, and the protagonist would have to come to her rescue (╬▔皿▔).

#(Sweat) I don't understand the protagonist's logic. If he wants revenge, why doesn't he join the official organization or try to get in touch with the supernatural world? He keeps saying he'll do anything to get revenge, but he ignores the official organization, which could increase his chances of success. It's ridiculous. The protagonist is just a nobody who can't even find his enemy's location, yet he ignores the official organization and is even afraid that the enemy will find him. The protagonist has a kind of brain-stem deficiency.

The most annoying one is my senior sister. She's completely useless and likes to say things that insult people's intelligence. Now they're adding the universally acknowledged flaw of having self-aware clones. Even a protagonist who, for some reason, can remotely control the life force within another person's body would be better than this. Compared to the novel "The Martial Saint of Fangyuan," it's somewhat better, but it retains some flaws that I can't accept, so I dropped it.

Kick me when you finally kill the Sirens, thanks brothers.

No wonder people say it's not as good after it was released... They gave me this plot where someone I just rescued goes and befriends a monster right after it's released—isn't that just like Gomon? #(So sad)

Doesn't this ability mean the exam is essentially open-book? #(Terrifying)

…I just want to see exciting battles, but what kind of garbage is this when it all becomes pay-to-play? The stark contrast between the before and after left me completely bewildered. Those who come later can continue following this story if they are willing; I will leave now.

If the monster Xu Yue had died in the final battle at night, it would have been an unforgettable plot point and could have foreshadowed future developments (allowing the protagonist to realize that monsters also have feelings). However, its resurrection made the subsequent plot incredibly awkward, uncomfortable, and ridiculous.

The main character is amazing! 👍

It's less than a million words, a bit short.