Succubi Can't Be Saints

The synopsis at first glance seemed like it was about corruption, and after reading the full synopsis, it really was corrupt—the Emperor is above all!

Well, I personally really like this book. Most of the content is quite good, so I subscribed to the whole thing. I'm currently on chapter 298 and will continue reading. I just want to offer some suggestions to the author, both big and small. Having read this far, I can say the author's writing skills are quite strong, and I genuinely enjoy many of the smaller plot points. However, the biggest problem lies in the design of some characters and plot elements. Basically, all the villains so far are male, even named male villains, and their behavior... Well, it's honestly a bit foolish. The named female characters are allies or are becoming allies. Of course, I know this is an Otome game, so the male allies must be handled with extreme care to avoid controversy, but personally, I feel there's a fairly clear gender divide. In the current climate, I feel many people aren't very accepting of gender-related themes, which might be one reason why this work hasn't achieved greater success. The author could look at the latest best-of-the-year work from another author, Otome, where the allies are mostly female, but the villains are both male and female and not as foolish. If the villains weren't exclusively male from the beginning, or if they weren't so foolish, the viewing experience would be much better. I think the fact that the villains are foolish males from the start is partly why the later scenes of Ange instigating others caused some controversy. Looking back, I realize that what I wrote was somewhat stream-of-consciousness, just writing whatever came to mind. And I felt that I had tried very hard to use softer words (lying down peacefully). Oh well, I feel that I would suggest that you delete it after reading it, author. I just hope that you can take a look and think about my little suggestion.

Why did you just suck your fingers?! Becoming a succubus isn't like this! I don't accept it! You should first drink cola laced with magic, then find some clothes woven from magic silk, go to church to attend Mass with voluptuous nuns, then, while strolling through the church, discover a few overly intimate nuns, then secretly watch them being intimate, then accidentally make a noise that lets the nuns notice you, then be invited to the Cradle of Pleasure by the nuns, then, in a daze, raise your pink index to 100, and finally, a high-ranking succubus nun will appear! Then you take your oath! Finally, the high-ranking succubus nun will reward you with a drop of blood! What?! You just came up here and sucked your fingers?! How dare you! Becoming a succubus isn't like this at all! I don't accept it!

The knotted wings 😌 directly deterred some readers.

What kind of succubus version of Dawn of the Sword is this? The synopsis made me think it was some kind of street racing or self-made author, but after reading it, I realized this succubus and Gao Wen are from the same school. Pretty good, actually.

This is really well written. It's clear the author was a succubus, a saintess, and a nun. The writing is very realistic, and it matches my experiences from a few years ago. Keep it up!

Although it's a succubus, it seems a bit unlikely. I still want to ask, do they have knotted wings?

They're just playing hard to get and never actually get on base, it's so frustrating watching! #(Sad) Hopefully the main character isn't some kind of stomach-soothing character.

War is a difficult subject to write; deciding whether to kill or not is tricky. While the main characters definitely won't die (probably not), the death of the nameless succubus is still quite painful.

It looks good, but please don't leave a review.