Chaldea on My Own

I'm here to lash out at this author's work. I always said that the way this author orchestrated things back then was basically killing their own book. Then this naive guy in the comments said, "Don't underestimate an author's imagination," and I couldn't help but laugh. The plot you wrote basically blocked all your escape routes. The protagonist has no motivation whatsoever, so how can there be any interaction? It's like you've ruined your own life without even realizing it, and you're still smugly trying to stir up trouble. Looking at the comments, I realized that the later plot points you wrote are basically unreadable. After the protagonist saved humanity, no one showed much emotion towards his deeds, not even gratitude. As a hero, the protagonist shouldn't be asking for anything in return. I agreed, but it's impossible for the Servant not to be angry after finding out, let alone suppress that anger. When you were describing your logic, you didn't consider the plot at all. Do you know that when you wrote the ending of version 1.0, you were actually targeting the enemy? The magician's indifference is reasonable, right? Yes, it's reasonable, but just because the Servants went through so much with the protagonist doesn't mean they have no feelings for him. Knowing that the protagonist, as a savior, saved the world and even took on responsibilities that should have been theirs, how could they not feel anything? I think any Servant who could hold back their anger would be this kind of 👍. If you had written any sequels where the Servants attacked Chaldea to protect the protagonist, the resulting explosion would have been far more exciting than this stagnant, stale ending. Otherwise, why would people say your level doesn't match your achievements?

The story is finished!

Once you've finished watching The Temple of Time, the second part wasn't very interesting.

Although I doubt anyone will read this book, I'll still ask a question: I remember there was a post from a writing perspective that said the author didn't portray Jeanne Alter's evil deeds deeply enough, lacking emotional impact. That post was quite good; I was planning to reread it regularly. But then the post was deleted. Does anyone remember that person's name?

Was I betrayed in the final chapter of FGO?

Kick me when you release a new book

When will the author release a new book?

How's this book doing, everyone? I haven't read it in a long time since the "Rhythm" incident.

I'm looking for an objective perspective from Shennong who hasn't yet entered the argument phase; I'm a bit unclear about the current tone.

The Fairy Kingdom has become so abstract and hilarious now, it's a fairy I can't even imagine. More of them! #(Funny) But what about Morgan? Wouldn't all of Morgan's previous efforts just become a joke?