She Is Not an Investigator

To be honest, although I enjoyed reading the whole book, I also had a somewhat uncomfortable feeling. First of all, most of the chapters in this book felt abruptly ended to me. Whenever the story was nearing its end, the pace would suddenly accelerate, leaving me dissatisfied when I reached the end and the "concluding celebration". Secondly, the structure of each major chapter is rather repetitive. It always starts with a calm surface, gradually becomes chaotic, and then rushes into a decisive final battle. It's really too much. Third, although I don't know if there's something wrong with my thinking, is it really appropriate to let so many people suddenly develop feelings for each other for no reason? At least I think it's very strange that more and more people with no sense of boundaries are appearing in the plot. Now let's talk about the parts that I liked. What captivated me most about this book was undoubtedly its protagonist, Iglesias. She possessed immense strength, both in reality and in spirit, demonstrating the will of a true human being. Having once been a model investigator, she was both afraid to accept and unsure how to handle her emotions; she wasn't a rigid, unchanging machine, but constantly adapted and changed her strategies to achieve her goals. As a human being, she possessed admirable character, unwavering will, and a clear direction. And she was undoubtedly the biggest reason I decided to read the entire book. Finally, the Christmas ending just abruptly ended! I'm going to stab you to death! I'm going to stab you to death! I'm going to stab you to death! (My goodness! O(≧口≦)O)

Actually, I really like your writing style, Momokawa. I've followed your work from Investigator to Strange Disqualification and now to your new book. Many of your books ended rather regrettably, like this one. I hope it can have an ending.

By the way, what's the cover image? I'd like the original.

I stopped at the train volume. The story was good, but the romance... I just couldn't accept it. The characters seemed like a harem monster, throwing themselves at new characters after only three chapters. Most of the female characters in the book seemed to be part of a harem. Reading the train volume, the only ones I could think of who were clearly not romanceable were Rin from the first chapter and the small group in the sister volume that could destroy the supernatural. Did the romance develop? A little, but not much. There was the phantom thief's unusually heavy emotions after being locked in the clock tower, Alex's shift from admiration to love after watching the protagonist "die" for him, and my favorite, Olivia's efforts to become a detective to keep the protagonist. The remaining characters I vaguely remembered were the witch mother and daughter, the mysterious Momokawa-san, and then there were those who only had one attitude towards the protagonist. The protagonist never explicitly said he liked anyone, or rather, he clearly didn't have any romantic feelings for almost any of the romanceable characters. The most proactive thing the protagonist did so far was when he said he and Olivia were lovers—of course, it was just a joke. Looking back at this book, my favorite parts are often the early to mid-sections of a volume—our Miss Igris, for some reason, embarks on a story, meets more people, attends a banquet at a castle, visits relatives because of an invitation, or something else entirely—a mix of ordinary, heartwarming daily life interspersed with unexpected events, chatting with friends, fighting cultists or strange beings, plus occasional humor; everything unfolds slowly, and this is my favorite part. Then, in the later stages of the story, the pace suddenly quickens, often with unexpected developments, like a man in a white suit, or a sudden long battle chapter, and then the volume abruptly ends, leaving me standing there, slowly typing a "?". It feels… like a promising start followed by a disappointing ending, inexplicable, and incomprehensible. The remaining complaints are that I hope there will be more perspectives from people other than the main characters to enrich the plot and the world-building, as well as more minor details like side characters. I added a harem tag; please remove it if the author thinks it doesn't fit. Finally, I wish the author's new book great success! #(Cute)

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