Persona: Proof of Existence

The book is excellent, and the author's character development is superb. My favorite part is the storyline involving Mishima. In the original work, as a supporter of the Phantom Thieves, his role was only introduced to advance the plot, making it difficult to feel like an outsider. This book, however, integrates everyone together, making each character feel part of the group, no longer isolated figures. It truly makes each character's story interconnected, unlike most pseudo-fiction where they're just given a name and left to fend for themselves. Overall, I enjoyed the character development and the fun interactions between everyone. I think this is the best P5 fanfiction I've ever read. #(Goodbye)

The first chapter is written... Difficult to evaluate. The reborn person is taken care of and becomes a mother to a little girl of the same age who has lost her mother. #(Vomit)

The scene where the mansion first appeared was terrible. Let me first explain why I came across this book. I just started playing Persona 5 and have only reached Futaba's storyline so far. In the game, Zhou Ke'er feels like a webcam in the main story. In the early main story dialogue, the cat, Ryuji, and Takamaki are the main characters, and Zhou Ke'er is the straight man. However, in the student council president's storyline and now, the main story dialogue is that Ryuji, Takamaki, the student council president, the poor guy, and the cat are the straight men, while Zhou Ke'er is just a webcam and a tool for issuing intrusion orders. The protagonist's presence in this book is greatly enhanced, and there are more interactions with other characters. This is why, even though the author copied many parts of the original plot, I was still able to read around seventy chapters. Personally, I think the protagonist could have handled the situation better at the mansion. Being pointed at with a gun and kicked out earlier was understandable, but confronting the real gun with a fake one later is truly baffling. The protagonist's stats are maxed out; if not superhuman, he's at least on par with a movie spy. He could have easily taken the time to pull the gun out of his bag before the woman even got up, throwing the bag or something else to restrain her hand holding the gun, or even just shaking her head with a beer bottle. Instead, he chose to pull out a fake gun and confront the real one. The contrast with the protagonist's 5A stats is too great. It's like the contrast between Star Platinum and Killer Emperor in close combat and Star Platinum getting beaten to a pulp, or the contrast of Superman getting a defeat recently. The author probably really likes the character of the mansion, so they thought this bit of oppression wouldn't make readers dislike him. However, this part of the story where the protagonist gets humiliated and has to rely on Sae Mashima for protection is really making me want to drop the book, especially since it's a paid chapter. Of course, the author can't change it now, since it's a story from over a year ago. I'll still keep watching.

The first part of this story about the rich mansion was so disgusting that I felt nauseous every time I watched it.

I couldn't stand the later parts of Volume 3 and dropped it. Putting aside the fact that the people on the subway had absolutely no connection to the protagonist, even if they did, after all those trials, didn't he grow at all? Why did he so readily call "GG" and sit back and wait to die? What's the point of feeling guilty for not awakening his inner strength to protect them beforehand? It made me want to vomit. #(Vomit)

The beginning was well-written, but it became increasingly pretentious starting with Alice, especially in parts one, two, and three. The main characters' setbacks were inexplicable, with difficulties created for the sake of difficulties, and suffering for the sake of suffering. I don't really understand why Ren Amamiya entrusted his future to Akira Kurusu. Aside from emotional intelligence, this main character is nowhere near as good as Ren Amamiya. #(Vomit)

I've been reading continuously, and I've reached over 600 chapters in about four or five days. The feeling of being stifled wasn't too bad, not that much. I think the part about the mansion was actually alright, because the earlier oppressive atmosphere actually made the later TJ feel more impactful. However, around chapter 600, when they go to the otaku's hometown, I know the later part is original plot, but the protagonist gives off a subtle sense of frustration, even more so than in the mansion area. Anyway, after more than 600 chapters, the protagonist no longer had that calm, strategic air, nor that detached protagonist feel. Instead, he leaned more towards the typical male protagonist of Japanese light novels, even inexplicably resembling the ordinary guy from the movie "Vision: The Phantom of the Opera." Then, even with all five dimensions maxed out, it wasn't very impactful. Frankly, the palace descriptions were too sparse. The original's shift from focusing on hearts to the protagonist's reliance on connections for judicial justice in reality is good, but it doesn't showcase the characteristics of the Heart Thieves, making it more like an urban novel protagonist with numerous partners.

I saw some readers asking for the group number in the comments section. My previous comments were blocked, so I'm posting it again here. 655293511

The district didn't even praise me individually, Wang is furious! 😡😡😡😡

Has the quality improved since it was released? Why are there so many positive comments in the comments section?