I'm a Pegasus, Not an Uma Musume

Try to avoid reading it; the author often abandons his work.

It looked great, but it was cut, but it still looks great.

Speechless. If you're going to write about Nearl, just write about Nearl! Why add the part where Nearl splits into two personalities? Don't you think that's completely unnecessary? I almost didn't want to read any further after seeing this... Sigh.

Sigh, why are there so few Uma Musume fanfics that feature exciting battles? A 700,000-word unfinished story is one thing, but if it's well-written, it's not unreadable. The beginning seemed alright, but after 700,000 words and still no chrysanthemum award, what's the point of reading it... What a pity!

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