Miss Mist Drifts with the Current

Let me give you an overall rating first # (Sunglasses): The writing is acceptable, not too trivial, but it is difficult for readers to resonate # (halo); the plot is relatively bland, almost non-toxic, but not attractive either # (black line); the character creation can only be said to be average, and the emotional drama is a bit confusing # (sweat); based on the above points, if the average quality of Hedgehog Cat's works is used as the standard, this book can barely score 7 points Detailed comments: First of all, it is the writing style. It can be seen that the author's writing skills are still good, especially the ability to outline the picture, which is excellent among all the hedgehog cats. However, the shortcomings are also obvious. It is difficult for me to resonate with the characters in the book. The protagonist's joy, anger, sorrow and joy are more than The book is relatively thin, especially when facing "old friends". The author tried his best to show the depression and confusion in the protagonist's heart, but the final impression gave people a feeling of heartlessness and desirelessness, which resulted in the book's immersive experience not being very good #(sweat) Then there is the plot issue. What I appreciate is that the author has almost no poisonous points in the plot. As a half-phoenix astronomical book, there is no obvious forced intelligence or lowering of strength. This is a very rare point# (cute). And in terms of world view, the overall logic is fairly self-consistent and there are some innovative points; OK, I'm going to start talking about the bad points #(sunglasses). One of the main reasons why this book was blocked is that the plot structure is unreasonable. The protagonist Feng Aotian is correct, but it is quite incorrect to let the protagonist have no crisis. Most of the plot of the whole book can be summarized as: the protagonist comes, the conflict breaks out, it is easily resolved, and finally dumplings are made! #(Haha), the sense of crisis is on the one hand, and the sense of unknown is on the other hand, which comes from the gradual understanding of the world, the gradual understanding of the enemy, and the gradual understanding of the protagonist. The chapter that handles these two points best is at the beginning when you first leave the Novice Village. Later it becomes: There are masters#(Scare), at first glance, they are the protagonist's "old friends", there are Enemy # (scare), don't worry about the clowns coming, there is a century-old layout # (scare), most of them are arranged by the protagonist himself. The whole main line can be described as a flat river. It can be said that I have just finished reading this book, but if you ask me to talk about an impressive chapter or conflict, then I really can't tell you. The memory points of the whole book are all in those "old friends" Next is the character creation. As mentioned before, the author's level cannot resonate with readers. From this point on, the character creation is difficult to be three-dimensional. #(LANSLIM), here I will let it go. The portrayal of the other protagonist Xilin in this book is actually quite poor. She is too ordinary. The advantages you can praise her are also valid when applied to other "old friends". And what qualities does she have? Or do you have any memories? Oh, no, it's not that she's not average, but she is the second heroine. This leads to a super outrageous problem: in the entire main line, the presence and role of this second heroine are very low, and she is completely supported by large-scale emotional lines. Just like a thug and emotional robot, you can exchange any "old friend" with her without any sense of violation #(LAN Shou), but do you think that "old friend" is well-shaped? , This is even more outrageous. Most of the "old friends" only have one or two chapters, and then they become mere tools, and sometimes the author himself even appears to be OOC#(ehhehe) Finally, it is also the most outrageous emotional line. The emotional line between the two protagonists is quite poor. The relationship between the two has no challenges, no twists and turns, and no growth. They have a high degree of favorability when they first meet. I know the author wants to create a natural love, but in essence It's more like love at first sight, a quick marriage, and then in the later part of the book the author made a patch that the two of them had known each other for a long time, but this patch is even more outrageous #(LAN Shou), the two fought side by side, and then fell in love with each other, which is indeed logical, then guess how many chapters are used here, the answer is three chapters! , It's okay to use this kind of emotional line on a supporting character, but it seems quite cheap when you use it on the protagonist. # (Black line) Another feature of this book is that the protagonist has many past lovers. At the beginning, I thought these "old friends" would be the highlight of the book, but in the end it turned out to be a failure. Author, tell me what difference will it make if you delete the setting that these "old friends" like the protagonist? , And then something unexpected happened. How should the protagonist deal with these feelings? The answer is, not to deal with it! #(Hey hehe), other people are devoted to the protagonist, and then the protagonist treats it as invisible. You say that you leave others aside and treat them as strangers. I have no objection, but the problem is that something happened to you yourself, and you have to ask these people for help. This seems very clown#(sweat), and then The patch is here again, oh, it turns out that the protagonist has fallen in love with Siren a long time ago. He is not a buddy. Isn't this even more outrageous? #(LAN Shou). The protagonist already has a lover, and then she knows that these "old friends" like her. Alas, but she doesn't say it or take the initiative to solve it. She just hangs it. I kept hanging on until hundreds of thousands of years later (sometimes more), and when they were all used up, I finally said that actually I already have someone I like, and you never had a chance from the beginning #(haha). If you don't understand, I use a modern word to describe the relationship between the two parties: "Keep a spare tire." You are not the number one pick that I like, but I won't tell you. I let you think that you can catch me. In this way, you can explode multiple people's gold coins at the same time and enjoy the emotional dedication of multiple people. When you are finally sure that you want to be with the number one pick, you can kick out the other spare tires. When I write a review, I usually focus on the shortcomings of the book. These shortcomings look a bit scary when put out there, but in fact, the experience in the book is not bad. However, these shortcomings do exist. On the one hand, they are a reference for new readers (although there should be no new readers #(laughing)), and on the other hand, they are also for the author (although the author may not have published a new book #(laughing)). At the same time, this is also my aftertaste. In the way of a book, this long review is used to prove: I have completely witnessed the beginning and end of a story. Although this story has many flaws, I almost gave up when the reading progress reached 90% (because of the 🐶f*ck emotional line). But when I finally finished the story, when this world and this story really ended, I suddenly felt: "It's not bad, not bad." Goodbye, Amy #(kira)

After looking at it, I probably know why the protagonist lost his memory. He played grooming games along the way, flirted with each other but not married, made so many promises, and finally closed the net. This scumbag woman gave up and just faced it with amnesia.