The Starforger Titan

The author's fight scenes are really weak. A single punch takes up three or four chapters of writing, and then when the fight actually starts, the author starts padding the plot again. Honestly, when you're fighting hard, you shouldn't be rambling. The fast-paced combat sequences should be written in one go. Don't just reuse the same settings that have been repeated countless times, and don't switch perspectives and write the same scene over and over again. This is so damn tedious! Is the author a ruminant? They keep repeating the same scene over and over, adding emotionally charged descriptions like "using all your strength" or "increasing your power," then describing it all again. It's torture to read so much! #(Vomit)

It started strong but ended weakly, what a pity.

Seriously, I'm speechless. Sometimes they can stretch a single scene into three or four chapters. That punch they landed on the First Witch King was just padding for word count.

The fight scenes need improvement. Every time a fight is about to happen, there's a bunch of explanations about the source of the power or some strange explanations and metaphors, making it feel choppy. Especially those scenes where you can kill instantly, they take several chapters to describe repeatedly, which gives the impression of padding the word count.

Where is the new book about mooncakes?

@{"Reader_id":"57436","reader_name":"Mooncake is no longer late"} Please update, master!!!