
Mond Was Reincarnated into an Element-devouring Beast and Was Adopted by Qin
About This Novel
Margaret: Did you hear that? The black cat that Captain Qin adopted is only a few months old. Not only can he act coquettishly and cutely, but now he has become a sperm and does not need to be fed. He can also make breakfast for Captain Qin. Fortunately, we have a cat-eared girl Diona in the Mao Tail bar who knows how to mix drinks. Lisa: Qin, I finally understand that the mood of life is no longer so focused on work. Have you learned to enjoy life? Sister, I no longer have to worry about her being so busy that she falls into a coma. Knight Lawrence: Damn it, is Leader Qin's cat serious? Such a small one can hit a wild boar and drag it back! Qin, the deputy captain of the Mondstadt Knights: It's great to have you. You can work overtime with me, help me with my official duties and give me someone to rely on, my love. Yura, the Wave Knight: Thank you, my love, for being my support when I was in danger and when the residents of Mondstadt spurned and insulted me because of my identity as Lawrence, for being with me silently every time I cried, and for helping me get revenge.
What Readers Think
Rating
Community(0)
Official(1)Scraped 6d ago
The segmentation is too poor... Internet novels cannot be written as essays. Well, it's not just the paragraph difference. There isn't even a period in the first paragraph of the second chapter. The writing is coherent. It can be separated by sentences and then it can be read in sections. If I write it all in one sentence, I don't want to read the entire paragraph on the screen. In addition, sometimes there are too many embellishments and not enough refinement. There is nothing wrong with that, but the segmentation... Author, please check for yourself whether it is comfortable to read on the mobile phone.
Rating
Community(0)
Official(1)Scraped 6d ago
The segmentation is too poor... Internet novels cannot be written as essays. Well, it's not just the paragraph difference. There isn't even a period in the first paragraph of the second chapter. The writing is coherent. It can be separated by sentences and then it can be read in sections. If I write it all in one sentence, I don't want to read the entire paragraph on the screen. In addition, sometimes there are too many embellishments and not enough refinement. There is nothing wrong with that, but the segmentation... Author, please check for yourself whether it is comfortable to read on the mobile phone.









