I Signed in the Wasteland

Let me give you some advice. Although the writing is good, it does not cater to the market demand. The next words may not be kind, but they are indeed true. If you want to sign, you should complete a small trend within three chapters to attract readers. If I were you, I could completely reduce these three chapters to about 3,000 words. Why? Because some content is redundant. The novel should be surprising and create more conflicts between characters. It's not good to be mediocre. Even though I have the experience of finishing this book, I still feel that I still haven't understood the true meaning of the three golden chapters. The golden finger should be pointed out directly at the beginning. The second point is to establish a sense of conflict and satisfaction. Although the protagonist has experienced a life and death crisis, it seems meaningless at this stage. He looks like a stand-alone protagonist, but he is skilled and makes sudden mistakes. However, I think it will be difficult for you to modify it, but you can make small modifications. The wooden handle can be broken when the protagonist is about to exert force, "or it could be another fault", and then secretly left behind to monitor it as a foreshadowing. Of course, the protagonist does not care about anyone knowing at this stage... Third, there is no need to be curious about the appearance of the system or to investigate how it appears. It can be summed up in one sentence: the protagonist has read many novels. Unexpectedly, everything in the novel is true, and he xx really obtained the legendary system. Then sign in and get something. Finally, a small event is completed, leaving a suspense to attract readers to continue reading. This is within three chapters, and the editor only reads it. Note: Internet literature is as deep as the ocean. If you want to write high-quality novels, you must first meet the needs of the market and get contract signings and recommendations from editors. Finally, thumbs up for your perseverance! !

Can you see the book cover? Why can't it be displayed on my side? It's obviously uploaded here!

The Emperor is very impressed by this work.

Does anyone who read the previous chapters still remember the name of Nie Yiye's father? Xiao Hai completely forgot about it. And because the computer system was recently reinstalled, the previous outline and details were all gone. Now Xiaohai is taking the time to make up for it!

Recently, the novel is being tested and promoted. If readers feel that the quality of the novel is satisfactory, please save it and recommend it below. If you don't leave, Xiaohai hopes you won't survive in ninety-nine times!

The writing is pretty good and the writing style is also good, keep it up! !