The Magician under the Hood

Is there anyone alive? Pay attention to me! The author is ignored and very shameless! Okay... I see what you mean.

I have been reading books for 7 or 8 years, and the main character, the girl, can be popular, but no matter how creative it is to write about dog licking, even if it is about dog licking, it is only the first one or two chapters, and you will definitely understand something in the third chapter. I have read 15 chapters and I am still licking.,,,, Reading novels is either fun, or there are interlocking plots, others are tired of licking in real life, and this is still the case in a novel, who will read it?

Licking a dog is not good. No one would like to see the protagonist licking a dog. There is no sense of involvement unless that person is also a licking dog.

Sorry I don't have any suggestions.

Nowadays, behind-the-scenes bosses are popular. The protagonist travels to the age of gods to create magic, and wizards and other types of behind-the-scenes bosses are popular.

To be honest, it's hard for me to watch. I couldn't help it after reading Chapter 15. You can't make money writing dog-licking books in Chuangshi. The magic setting is good, but a sense of mystery is the essence of magic. Unless the spiritual energy is revived, it will not look good at all without a sense of mystery. Otherwise, just like Marvel, magic is secret and not open to the public. Once it is open to the public, unless the writing is god-like, has a god-level outline, and has a mysterious magic system, it will not be written at all. If you want to develop magic in a real world where magic is insulated, you can use the old-fashioned method of bringing in a meteorite and resurrecting the spiritual energy. Otherwise, if the author wants to write a book about creating a magic system in the real world, no one will care about you. I also admire the author very much. He just finished the book, which is considered very impressive. If he can persevere next time, most people will not write 100 chapters after seeing this achievement. So I give five stars for the author's persistence. As for the plot, I don't give it a single point. Why! Because the author licked everyone away. It was too licky and not good-looking. The protagonist is 18 years old and has a personality like a primary school student. What the hell is going on. The author wants to write that the protagonist has an Eastern character, but he adopts a Western attitude. Is it because the author is afraid that the protagonist can do magic in the East and no one will see it? No, this is more front-line. Nowadays, novels are like this. If you don't have the ability to write Western novels, don't write them. This is the result of forcing yourself to write them. Nowadays, novels are written with protagonists who are not smart, immature and not interesting at all. They also need to be ruthless and decisive. The most important thing is not to lick. I won't go into details. I don't even work that hard when writing novels and typing...

The finale is coming soon, and the author's first work is finally finished!