In My Later Years, I Can Travel to the West as an Emperor
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Li Xuan was reborn in the world of cultivating immortals. After five thousand years, he finally achieved enlightenment and became invincible in all the worlds. In his first life, he was called the Great Emperor of the Human Race. In his second life, he could not find a single opponent in the vast universe. There is only half a step away from the immortal wonderland, but it cannot be overcome with great effort. The second generation was dying in his later years and could not survive the third life. Although he is invincible in this world, compared with all the enlightened ones in the past, he is just an ordinary one! The old age of the person who became enlightened is unknown, and Li Xuan also encountered something strange. He is old and frail but has no ambition to fall into the abyss. The self-destruction of the Taoists attacks, the ancient supreme siege, and sudden changes occur at the critical moment. After snatching a coffin, Li Xuan did not want to kill himself and survive, but only wanted to bury himself. Unexpectedly, the coffin was a coffin from two realms, and by coincidence, it traveled to the Immortal World in Journey to the West. After Li Xuan met Xiao Zhuanfeng, he had to lament the magic of nature...
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Official(30)Scraped 12d ago
There is a problem when you look at the introduction. In the second life, Invincible cannot find an opponent, but he is said to be the weakest one in history.
Damn, it's obviously pretty good looking, but the comments are all copy and paste.
Others are traveling through the ancient times, but you are traveling through the West, 😐
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Official(30)Scraped 12d ago
There is a problem when you look at the introduction. In the second life, Invincible cannot find an opponent, but he is said to be the weakest one in history.
Damn, it's obviously pretty good looking, but the comments are all copy and paste.
Others are traveling through the ancient times, but you are traveling through the West, 😐
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