Immortality Martial Arts: Starting from the Heavenly Prison Jailer
by Yunlilu
About This Novel
Lu Ning traveled through the Great Zhou Dynasty and became a jailer in the Little Heavenly Prison. When he learned that there were immortals, Buddhas, demons, and martial arts powers in this world, he decided to stay in the heavenly prison to gain experience. What about listening to music and being a woman? That has the fragrance of liver experience! Bearing the fate of "Heavenly Punishment", he watched the rise and fall of life and death in the heavenly prison. It wasn't until one day that a woman with great luck was imprisoned that he realized that there is no conflict between liver experience and women! Since then, Lu Ning walked out of the prison... ... Many years later, Lu Ning realized that everything under the sky was a prison: "I, Lu Changan, can not only punish people, but I can also punish heaven and the Tao." -------- PS: This book is also called: "Lord of Heavenly Punishment"
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Official(29)Scraped 19d ago
There's a reason why no one is watching.
What's the matter with the protagonist's eldest brother who didn't get off work and probably raised him and his sister, but the protagonist starts having an affair with his sister-in-law when he comes home? Can the author have any moral bottom line?
I liked it at first, but then I started choosing readers.
The writing is disgusting. The family is very warm, but they have to write about daydreaming about the sister-in-law, and then use sad autumn poems to show off during the meal.
There's a reason why no one watches it
The author should reflect on it himself. There is a reason why no one is reading it. Who gave you the courage to be a fourth-grade rookie like you? ? ? I said it myself, there are at least 30,000 people in the fourth grade? Plus more hidden? At the age of 17, you insist on becoming the third grade? If I were a first-class master, I would definitely arrest you and torture you! What secret do you have! What an opportunity! Do you dare to participate in the battle for the throne? ? ? ? Think for yourself
Forcibly subduing one's wits, one big boss plots against another big boss, and you, a little loser, go to disrupt the situation. Why don't you become so awesome?
As a cheating protagonist, you must have the awareness of a cheating protagonist, and you, the prisoner of the prison, will stay well. Are you tired of having to gather a lot of relatives, friends, brothers and sisters? There is no help at the front, but you must take them off later. Otherwise, if you are still there when they are old, what are you doing? So the character setting problem is too big
To write the protagonist as a single person for ten thousand years has to be improved several levels.
It's so fucking pretentious. The only thing I can't stand is the pretentious chapter. The rest is okay.
Ordinary people living in the protagonist's world are unlucky because of the protagonist. He cannot kill the enemy but specifically provokes the enemy. For the sake of experience, he runs away after provocation. He doesn't want the enemy to catch up with him and destroy the city. Isn't it a simple problem? And provoking a bunch of enemies at once does not take into account the consequences of the enemy's anger. You say it's okay if his enemies take the initiative to do bad things. They will just lie in their lairs and remain motionless. The protagonist only provokes them for the sake of experience.
After reading about thirty chapters, the upgrading pace is okay, but the emotional drama is really weak. I suggest that the author not write it if he is not good at writing it, and just make the protagonist an orphan. Especially the two paragraphs about his sister-in-law searching for his gold bars. It's okay if you write it once, but it's really poisonous if you repeat it many times. It's like your company gave you hundreds of thousands of bonuses, but your sister-in-law took them all away. Your mother would still be able to accept it. Even if your eldest sister-in-law is as motherly as you are, she wouldn't be able to. At most, it's just advice and supervision, but taking it directly is really poisonous.
This novel is average, I can barely read it!
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Official(29)Scraped 19d ago
There's a reason why no one is watching.
What's the matter with the protagonist's eldest brother who didn't get off work and probably raised him and his sister, but the protagonist starts having an affair with his sister-in-law when he comes home? Can the author have any moral bottom line?
I liked it at first, but then I started choosing readers.
The writing is disgusting. The family is very warm, but they have to write about daydreaming about the sister-in-law, and then use sad autumn poems to show off during the meal.
There's a reason why no one watches it
The author should reflect on it himself. There is a reason why no one is reading it. Who gave you the courage to be a fourth-grade rookie like you? ? ? I said it myself, there are at least 30,000 people in the fourth grade? Plus more hidden? At the age of 17, you insist on becoming the third grade? If I were a first-class master, I would definitely arrest you and torture you! What secret do you have! What an opportunity! Do you dare to participate in the battle for the throne? ? ? ? Think for yourself
Forcibly subduing one's wits, one big boss plots against another big boss, and you, a little loser, go to disrupt the situation. Why don't you become so awesome?
As a cheating protagonist, you must have the awareness of a cheating protagonist, and you, the prisoner of the prison, will stay well. Are you tired of having to gather a lot of relatives, friends, brothers and sisters? There is no help at the front, but you must take them off later. Otherwise, if you are still there when they are old, what are you doing? So the character setting problem is too big
To write the protagonist as a single person for ten thousand years has to be improved several levels.
It's so fucking pretentious. The only thing I can't stand is the pretentious chapter. The rest is okay.
Ordinary people living in the protagonist's world are unlucky because of the protagonist. He cannot kill the enemy but specifically provokes the enemy. For the sake of experience, he runs away after provocation. He doesn't want the enemy to catch up with him and destroy the city. Isn't it a simple problem? And provoking a bunch of enemies at once does not take into account the consequences of the enemy's anger. You say it's okay if his enemies take the initiative to do bad things. They will just lie in their lairs and remain motionless. The protagonist only provokes them for the sake of experience.
After reading about thirty chapters, the upgrading pace is okay, but the emotional drama is really weak. I suggest that the author not write it if he is not good at writing it, and just make the protagonist an orphan. Especially the two paragraphs about his sister-in-law searching for his gold bars. It's okay if you write it once, but it's really poisonous if you repeat it many times. It's like your company gave you hundreds of thousands of bonuses, but your sister-in-law took them all away. Your mother would still be able to accept it. Even if your eldest sister-in-law is as motherly as you are, she wouldn't be able to. At most, it's just advice and supervision, but taking it directly is really poisonous.
This novel is average, I can barely read it!
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