
Journey to the West Demon Cultivator: Starting from the Bull Demon
by Xu Jin
About This Novel
The new book "Journey to the West: Demon Cultivator: Starting from the Snake Demon" has been released Dark Flow + Demon Cultivator + Broken Mirror Bead + Extreme Dao This book is also called "The Strong Bull Demon King" Two fists strike the path of life and death, and one swing of the stick creates the path to immortality.
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Official(7)Scraped 11d ago
How is this fight written? A cow sneaks up on a goshawk from the water. It would be easy to say if the demon has magic. Your writing style and paragraphs are inconsistent and confusing. There is also the writing about the fox, the white snake, and the great sage, and the writing about Japan is worse than destroying the whole world.
Rubbish. If you can't write, don't write.
Fuck you
***, can you write about fighting? He'll die without being beaten
Is this the Bull Demon King?
This should not be the Bull Demon King. The Bull Demon King in the original work is a white cow.
Why don't you continue writing? Pretty good-looking?
Okay, please come on and take good care of you. Not bad.
I've read the previous one, and it's pretty much the same situation.
I can only say that it is okay, after all, I am a novice author.
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Community(0)
Official(7)Scraped 11d ago
How is this fight written? A cow sneaks up on a goshawk from the water. It would be easy to say if the demon has magic. Your writing style and paragraphs are inconsistent and confusing. There is also the writing about the fox, the white snake, and the great sage, and the writing about Japan is worse than destroying the whole world.
Rubbish. If you can't write, don't write.
Fuck you
***, can you write about fighting? He'll die without being beaten
Is this the Bull Demon King?
This should not be the Bull Demon King. The Bull Demon King in the original work is a white cow.
Why don't you continue writing? Pretty good-looking?
Okay, please come on and take good care of you. Not bad.
I've read the previous one, and it's pretty much the same situation.
I can only say that it is okay, after all, I am a novice author.









