
A Fighter Who Came Out of Hinata
by Yanzhao Muyu
About This Novel
New book "This Naruto works too hard" Reincarnation Eye plus Guiyuan Qigong Master. This is sure! By the way... Why does the steel-steel bone react with Byakugan? Hyuga clan, single female protagonist
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Official(58)Scraped 13d ago
Time is really messy. Hinata became the leader of the clan when she was not even ten years old? Author, you drank too much Sanlu. You wrote the protagonist as a severely delusional person. He is only a few years old and is thinking about things more than thirty years later. He even treats himself as a crab and walks in the middle of the road. He is speechless. If nothing happens, who will?
Never have a female protagonist, such as Death Fire Sea, the New Four Demon Slayers, Giants, and Hunters. They only have companions, and at most they end up with just a wife. There are basically no female protagonists who are really popular. Don't engage in any romance dramas. All those hot-blooded dramas about romance are off the market. The real market tells you that if you want to be popular, don't have a female protagonist. Naruto is a worker, the mastermind behind the scenes, Zhen Eun, and Sword Soul are all without female protagonists. They are all very popular and make a lot of money.
Retro style Naruto fanfic
The style dreamed back to ten years ago. The protagonist was not only prophetic but also invincible in the early stages. He was a fan of the world and everyone revolved around him. Everyone developed according to his arrangements... It has been a long time since anyone dared to write so directly, because they were afraid of being called a novice. Of course, this article itself is a bit novice, so the advantages and disadvantages are obvious... The advantage is that it is rare to change everyone's minds through their own efforts before they become bad and rotten, so that everyone can return to the right path and continue to unite as one. It is also rare to put the contradiction of the Akatsuki organization on the bright side, that is, the essence is to teach three enemy ninjas, and then ask them to help but refuse to help. The hidden dangers are huge, and then the information about the Rinnegan eye is revealed, making them enemies of the whole world... This is much better than many novels that cover up and complicate simple problems. Also, it is rare to use the art of reincarnation in the right way, that is, resurrecting the past to draw on their experience and wisdom, rather than simply using it as a thug to cause destruction... These are unique features. It can be seen that the overall atmosphere has a positive outlook on life, the protagonist is kind and righteous, and does not mess with others and will destroy others for himself. Suspicious conspiracy theories... The disadvantage is that the combat power expands too fast. The protagonist can always directly gain the favor of others, annihilating the subjective initiative of other characters, and one person bears all the heavy responsibilities. The emotional line is hard to describe in one sentence, and the heroine is a slightly outdated nymphomaniac. To sum up, the overall rhythm and logic are very retro, just like when the fanfic was first published, the protagonist Wei Guangzheng, the plot is smooth... Except for the dozens of chapters at the end that are verbose and incomprehensible, there is nothing wrong with it, so it is recommended to end it directly. You can still take a look at the front.
The plot is quite good, but the immortality in the end is really poisonous. After all, if the world is bigger, there is no problem in cultivating immortality, but immortality in a small world is very problematic, and there are not enough resources.
I just read the first few chapters and stopped reading. . .
Why does 5-year-old Uchiha Mikoto dare to play with Hinata's protagonist? The relationship between the two families is very poor. What's more, Mikoto's status in the Uchiha family is not low, so she dares to seek out Hinata's friendship? ? ?
Are you really poisonous, do you want to be Uchiha Glaze's father? A time traveler and five-year-old Uchiha Mikoto started to poison!
Very nice
Just now, I witnessed the passage of life with my own eyes. For the first time, I felt that life is so fragile. The fish shop owner just killed a fish in front of me
Making things up
I won't go into too much detail, but in the author's writing, Uchiha Mikoto had double Magatama Sharingan at the age of 5. Is this still visible? Uchiha Itachi opened the single Magatama Sharingan when he was only 8 years old. This author is the kind of author who just writes whatever he wants, without caring about the original settings and underlying logic. How the hell is this worth watching?
What kind of crap is this written? After reading it for a long time, it has nothing to do with your profile.
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Official(58)Scraped 13d ago
Time is really messy. Hinata became the leader of the clan when she was not even ten years old? Author, you drank too much Sanlu. You wrote the protagonist as a severely delusional person. He is only a few years old and is thinking about things more than thirty years later. He even treats himself as a crab and walks in the middle of the road. He is speechless. If nothing happens, who will?
Never have a female protagonist, such as Death Fire Sea, the New Four Demon Slayers, Giants, and Hunters. They only have companions, and at most they end up with just a wife. There are basically no female protagonists who are really popular. Don't engage in any romance dramas. All those hot-blooded dramas about romance are off the market. The real market tells you that if you want to be popular, don't have a female protagonist. Naruto is a worker, the mastermind behind the scenes, Zhen Eun, and Sword Soul are all without female protagonists. They are all very popular and make a lot of money.
Retro style Naruto fanfic
The style dreamed back to ten years ago. The protagonist was not only prophetic but also invincible in the early stages. He was a fan of the world and everyone revolved around him. Everyone developed according to his arrangements... It has been a long time since anyone dared to write so directly, because they were afraid of being called a novice. Of course, this article itself is a bit novice, so the advantages and disadvantages are obvious... The advantage is that it is rare to change everyone's minds through their own efforts before they become bad and rotten, so that everyone can return to the right path and continue to unite as one. It is also rare to put the contradiction of the Akatsuki organization on the bright side, that is, the essence is to teach three enemy ninjas, and then ask them to help but refuse to help. The hidden dangers are huge, and then the information about the Rinnegan eye is revealed, making them enemies of the whole world... This is much better than many novels that cover up and complicate simple problems. Also, it is rare to use the art of reincarnation in the right way, that is, resurrecting the past to draw on their experience and wisdom, rather than simply using it as a thug to cause destruction... These are unique features. It can be seen that the overall atmosphere has a positive outlook on life, the protagonist is kind and righteous, and does not mess with others and will destroy others for himself. Suspicious conspiracy theories... The disadvantage is that the combat power expands too fast. The protagonist can always directly gain the favor of others, annihilating the subjective initiative of other characters, and one person bears all the heavy responsibilities. The emotional line is hard to describe in one sentence, and the heroine is a slightly outdated nymphomaniac. To sum up, the overall rhythm and logic are very retro, just like when the fanfic was first published, the protagonist Wei Guangzheng, the plot is smooth... Except for the dozens of chapters at the end that are verbose and incomprehensible, there is nothing wrong with it, so it is recommended to end it directly. You can still take a look at the front.
The plot is quite good, but the immortality in the end is really poisonous. After all, if the world is bigger, there is no problem in cultivating immortality, but immortality in a small world is very problematic, and there are not enough resources.
I just read the first few chapters and stopped reading. . .
Why does 5-year-old Uchiha Mikoto dare to play with Hinata's protagonist? The relationship between the two families is very poor. What's more, Mikoto's status in the Uchiha family is not low, so she dares to seek out Hinata's friendship? ? ?
Are you really poisonous, do you want to be Uchiha Glaze's father? A time traveler and five-year-old Uchiha Mikoto started to poison!
Very nice
Just now, I witnessed the passage of life with my own eyes. For the first time, I felt that life is so fragile. The fish shop owner just killed a fish in front of me
Making things up
I won't go into too much detail, but in the author's writing, Uchiha Mikoto had double Magatama Sharingan at the age of 5. Is this still visible? Uchiha Itachi opened the single Magatama Sharingan when he was only 8 years old. This author is the kind of author who just writes whatever he wants, without caring about the original settings and underlying logic. How the hell is this worth watching?
What kind of crap is this written? After reading it for a long time, it has nothing to do with your profile.










