
There's Something Wrong with My Female Apprentices
About This Novel
Zhou Jing, the polished commander, finally triggered the system. Not only could he get a tenfold rebate for cultivating a disciple, he could also participate in a lottery and passively improve his cultivation. From then on, Zhou Jing vowed to be a selfless leader and devote himself wholeheartedly to serving his disciples. It's just that... The development of things gradually began to deviate from his expectations. It's like the eldest disciple who never grows up. Although he is cute and cute, he always feels like he is not very smart. The second disciple is obviously a lady, but in fact she is a nymphomaniac girl. The third disciple who is full of tea is also a troublesome person who is good at acting. He doesn't think about making progress all day long, and just wants to attract the master's attention. Zhou Jing: I asked you guys, can you be normal? [Relaxing novel about cultivating immortals]
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Official(6)Scraped 10d ago
Your plot is so nonsense that I can't appreciate it. You accept a disciple and you take a gamble and try your best to follow the routine. The plot result is too messy.
Are you kidding me? It's so embarrassing. Hahaha.
The protagonist is just a wage earner, working for the system🤗
Why don't you update it? One, two, three, four, five, six.
I can't appreciate it, it's like a child writing a composition, one is one, two is two... it's a bit poisonous
The characters quarreled like children, without any logic
Just say it briefly
The subject matter is still very good, and there are no big poisonous points so far. However, there are some paragraphs that are really awkward, and sometimes there are inexplicable punctuation marks.
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Community(0)
Official(6)Scraped 10d ago
Your plot is so nonsense that I can't appreciate it. You accept a disciple and you take a gamble and try your best to follow the routine. The plot result is too messy.
Are you kidding me? It's so embarrassing. Hahaha.
The protagonist is just a wage earner, working for the system🤗
Why don't you update it? One, two, three, four, five, six.
I can't appreciate it, it's like a child writing a composition, one is one, two is two... it's a bit poisonous
The characters quarreled like children, without any logic
Just say it briefly
The subject matter is still very good, and there are no big poisonous points so far. However, there are some paragraphs that are really awkward, and sometimes there are inexplicable punctuation marks.









