My Father Liu Xuande

Yes, it has a strong historical flavor and is not brainless. It describes the interest disputes and strategic planning very well. It is a fine book.

Liu Feng, don't be too outrageous. Unless you say it's just an excuse, isn't he an adopted son? You call me your biological son?

Brother, give me one more episode. I'm dying. Please, brother, I feel like there are ants crawling on me. Give me one more episode. Just one episode. Please, I swear I will never touch this thing again. I really can't stand it anymore.

The biggest shortcoming of this book is that it feels like a Han Dynasty celebrity who dreams of gods and ghosts all day long cannot take refuge in you. Liu Bang is so powerful, and he doesn't say he dreams of gods.

The narrative method of this book is like a storytelling, introducing the characters while telling the plot, and the author does not make it clear that the character introduction is the psychological activities of the protagonist, and it is completely told to the readers from the perspective of the narrator. As a result, I often jump in and out, and the sense of substitution is extremely low. Many online articles have this characteristic. The author is afraid that readers will not understand or misunderstand, so he tries his best to explain. This is a sign of lack of confidence. So why do I keep following it? It's because I don't understand the nooks and crannies and inconspicuous characters in the Three Kingdoms. I mainly read the author's resume and personality of these characters. I still have a common problem with online novels when reading this book, which is swallowing supporting characters. Even the protagonist Liu Feng's father, Liu Bei, has very few scenes and perspectives, which is incredible.

Xuzhou wants to fight for hegemony, Cao Cao and Yanzhou must not touch Cao Cao. Yanzhou is a natural ally now, and even Cao resists Yuan. Yuan Shao must get Qingzhou in the Battle of Gongsun before taking the land of Hebei. He will use Qing Xu to develop sea, salt, and commerce in the two states of ancient Qi. , Develop economic alliance with Cao Cao, then develop naval forces, reduce border lines, attack in the south and defend in the north, and use the natural dangers of the Yangtze River as logistics for a decisive battle with the Jiangdong clan. Cao Cao will definitely be able to win Guanzhong. In the later stage of the four-nation struggle for hegemony, the Liu family in Yizhou will inevitably be a natural ally Friends, among the four kingdoms, Yuan Shao from the three continents of Hebei is the strongest. He uses the art of vertical and horizontal to delay time. The protagonist Xu Yang (mostly) Qing is bound to have the highest war potential in the three continents of Hebei. Among the three continents of Hebei, only Jizhou has a rich and sufficient population. Most of Cao Cao's elites are in Henan. At that time, the war potential of Yanzhou and the Central Plains was low because of successive droughts in the Central Plains. Guanzhong was ruined by the Liangzhou warlords and was on the verge of Yizhou. The Liu family of Jingzhou was looking at them. They destroyed Yuan Shao first and left Cao Cao as the southwest buffer zone to attack Cao Cao's grain supply. Economically, if the protagonist is more brutal when destroying Yuan Shao, he can unite with the rising Xianbei Kebineng in the north (there will be political consequences), or he can use sea ships from Qingzhou to attack Liaodong Gongsun Ping to attack Yuan Shao on both sides. The protagonist can save a lot of money due to the sea transportation of grain and grass. , Drag Yuan Shao to death. Of course, at that time, if Cao Cao was not fighting Liu Bei for Hanzhong or fighting the Liangzhou War, it could also be due to the great disaster in the Central Plains and the lack of food. It would be simple to eliminate Yuan Shao and unify the world. Of course, even Liu Bei cannot be in a hurry to destroy Cao Cao. Step by step, we must consider the border line of the defense zone. We must not occupy too much of the border with the southwest. War between countries is a threat. Just like Sima Yi, it drags down the population in the south. At most, the population explosion in the Lianghuai area of ​​the Central Plains of Hebei will drag down the southwest. Of course, we have to survive until then.

Speculate the future direction of this book The strategy of this book is to conquer the world starting from Xuzhou, which I personally feel is quite difficult. Because Xuzhou is a battleground for military strategists. In addition to having advantages over the Jiangdong separatist forces, Xuzhou is located in the plains and will be defeated by the unified northern regime. Since we have chosen Xuzhou as our base, we must think about how to survive in the cracks and continue to grow. Just my humble opinion, just for laughs. The first step, which is what we are currently doing, is to conquer Zang Ba, stabilize Xuzhou, and create a monolith. The second step is to count the days. The war between Lu Bu and Cao Cao is about to fail. The author also said that Lu Bu's best way out is to join Liu Bei. In response to Lu Bu's personal suggestion, he should find a way to drive Lu Bu to Jiangdong. It also lays the foundation for future plots in Jiangdong. After all, Sun Ce is now about to be weakened at an epic level. And the aristocratic families in Jiangdong were also happy to have Lu Bu, a rootless military leader, come to compete with Sun Ce. The third step, then came the years when Cao Cao took the emperor to order the princes, Yuan Shao defeated Gongsun, and Yuan Shu became emperor. Among these events, I personally feel that the only one who can get a bargain is Yuan Shu proclaiming himself emperor. If I add a little more, Qingzhou was captured during the end of Gongsun. In the first step, you can force Qingzhou, but this will cut off the relationship with Yuan Shao. After all, they were still allies before. The fourth step is the Battle of Guandu. There are two ideas for the Battle of Guandu. One is to fight with Cao against Yuan. Although Yuan Shao failed in the Battle of Guandu, if it weren't for the heir, it would have taken Cao Cao many years to conquer the north. If Liu Bei intervenes, Youji will want to get at least half of it, and Yanzhou along the way will also need some as a reference. In this way, according to Youji Yanqingxu, the power has become strong. The second idea is to go south to compete for Jiangdong. After all, the Battle of Guandu has been going on for so many years. Liu Bei took advantage of the lack of time to care about the north and coupled with his early efforts to drive away wolves and devoured tigers, Jiangdong would definitely be in disarray. After getting the basic base of Jiangdong, he sent a message to decide on Jiaozhou, waiting for Liu Biao to die and plot to seize Jingzhou. Cao Cao should attack Guanzhong, Bingzhou, and Xiliang during this period. The East-West confrontation officially formed. Let's write this first😘

Before the 400th chapter, it can be considered a masterpiece, but the articles after the surrender of Sun Ce and the attack on Shanyue are like useless articles. The narrative is sloppy and the main line becomes blurred. It is often impossible to finish an event in more than ten chapters, and the more I read, the more uncomfortable it becomes. There is also the fact that the protagonist behaves as benevolent and trustworthy as Liu Bei to the outside world, but Sun Ce's matter is not handled well. It takes dozens of chapters. First, he deliberately forces Sun Ce to massacre the city, conquers two talents who were exterminated, and promises them revenge; then he backhandedly surrenders Sun Ce, and all the Sun family's power is taken over. In order to make up for Sun Ce, he also deliberately arranged the so-called mission of making meritorious service and narrow escape from death. As a result, Sun Ce achieved great success by brushing his face and evading his words. Later, he also made Sun Ce a lieutenant general. The revenge he had promised to his younger brother was just ignored. After writing this story, the protagonist is neither yin nor yang. He no longer has the heroic spirit of a young man, nor is he as sinister and scheming as a hero. He looks like a two-skinned person, which makes it uncomfortable to watch.

The story line is clear and the protagonist has a clear goal, but there is a big problem: there are too many explanations. This is a typical common problem of Xiaobaiwen. Writing a novel is a narrative, and you need to integrate those digressions and background sounds into the plot, character dialogue, and psychological description. Jumping in and out frequently, readers often jump into scenes and feel very tired.

If your introduction is not rigorous, how can you expect your writing to be good?